I dont know if anyone's gonna see this review considerimg the fact that this is a pretty old story but...
...shiiiiiiiiiiit, this was actually amazing my dude. The writing style the use of words and emotion (atleast in the later chapters) and the humor put into the story actually made this really interesting, and also a fun read.
Usually hetalia fan fiction is kinda cheaply written weeb stuff but this was pretty good considering what it is!
Thou some parts (like the use of 'smex' or yaoi jokes' or germany randomly kissing italy) were kinda out of place, this was still good.
I really enjoyed the settings and emotions in it (like, the scene where they kiss for the first time the bedroom scene) they were really well done.
I think i may be rambling now but, just wanted to say great work on this hats off to you bro!

Wow nope -420/10 would not read again

I keep getting confused with japan you wrote his name a few times by mistake?:D

Germany-san has yaoi senses? XD I. Love. This. So. Much! LFHBGIZUotpDGZHGDotpGIUZGHIPGig

Even Germany says Pastaaaaaa! XD I love this. :3

That one phrase:
With. His. Stick. In. His. Hand.
LMFAO

Just finished reading. It was good :D though I read it with their human names rather than their country names and imagined it as a sort of college au where they are human lol

Omfg. I just decided to search for the longest, completed JapIta fanfic because I'm thinking of getting on that ship, and I read the description of this and thought to myself "hmm.. Why not?" And then I clicked the title at the same time as I thought 'why not?' And I was like woaahhhh, this fic can read my thoughts xD anyway, I'll actually read it now lol.

MORE! make a three some and send me link! please!#QRFKLSdfjasod;j

Oh ear god you turned germany in to hungary XD

Wow I was alittle sad there wasn't a threesom but a fangirl can always dream heh but amazing pm me If you wana talk _

D'AW SO ADORABLE 3 i loved it, it was fantastic and shmexy and delicious ;D you should write a sequel :3

It was ok.

Germany was too ooc and Italy shouldn't be using Japanese words and '-chan'.

Canada should be trying to make peace, not going along with what America says.

In short the occ-ness of the characters let it down.

However the storyline was good.

Omg, lool!I was like laughing the whole time. ) I'd never heard of Hetalia before this fic so I did a quick check up to get an idea of the characters and you wrote it so cute! Kawaiii *starry eyes*

*Pretends to get all teary eyed but dabs discretely at a tiny blood drop instead*

best Hetalia Japan fanfic I've read so far. Please make more :)