Great story

Damn I really wished you continued to the confrontation at least that's the best part of these types of fanfic's!

Would of been more salt in the wounds is if you made naruto fart every few seconds he was held by the leaf Ninja's. Also he get a hard on while temari held him making sakura and hinata jealous, ha stupid fan girlsヽ(Д)ﾉ

Another worthless pathetic writer who can’t finish what they start. Hope you are dead because that would be excusable. Otherwise you are a sad sack of shit. Delete this unfinished garbage. Any unfinished story abandoned for over a year should be deleted. So it doesn’t waste people’s time and clutter up the sites.

This author is a fucking idiot. I hate stupid writers. Hope you catch your hand in a car door and shatter your damn fingers for writing such stupid trash.

Hi! Amazing fiction so far! I just found this and was wondering if you ever planned on updating again? This is really good and a shame for it to stop here!

Hello! Please update, this is really good! I just want to keep reading and re-reading this until I can’t read anymore! This is just amazing! Please continue!

Ok I’m definitely not crying because this has no more chapters...

Will naruto remain as villain here? oh btw he look so fucking hot

bro man pleaseeeeeeee update soon please

Fuck you asshole. Your mother takes a mean dicking behind a dumpster to purposefully spit in you and your cocksucking fathers face. Hope you fuck off a roof soon.

why did you stop?

This is sooooooo good!

That was great. Your story has a great storyline.

It was great I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of your work

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