| Reviews for Lost, Disturbed and Seeking Revenge |
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TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 14 . 6/28 Also I gotta at add, at this point i nthis story. IT IS FORGOTTEN THAT BELLA HAD NO INTENTION of telling Edward he had a son.. But somehow that doesn't factor into Edward's mind when he talking about trust... |
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 11 . 6/28 Ok forget thi.. Now Edward WAS scared to trust her from the get go? MAYBE he was fucking right. she sure didn't fucking TRUST him. This is quickly turning into it's Edward's fault. AND honestly, your villian sucks, you basically giving him superpowers. |
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 7 . 6/28 So what the fuck is James? A rapist kidnapper and hit man? And also knows how to avoid police detection. The guy is gonna be on a watch list, he was convicted of rape. And apprently he has some strong connections.. This is getting ridiculous, you are making this small time rapist into some big bad crime lord that can do all. |
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 4 . 6/28 I find it hilarious that Bella gets hurt over Edward denying that they are a 'we' in the way Aro was suggesting.. What the fuck was she expecting? At first you don't trust the guy at all, then you don't tell him about his baby, with NO PLANS to do so btw.. What is this lady expecting? |
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 3 . 6/28 HOLD ON, what she did is not in the past.. How can he possibly trust to do right by him when the time comes WHEN TIME AND TIME again, she has let him down? This Edward is a sucker. |
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 2 . 6/28 I think her reason for being there is gonna make Edward angry and resentful of her. |
Lisa chapter 17 . 9/1/2019 Oh are they lovely. |
Lisa chapter 16 . 9/1/2019 I'm scared for Bella and baby Luke. |
Lisa chapter 15 . 9/1/2019 OMG. |
Lisa chapter 14 . 8/31/2019 Oh that sweet. |
Lisa chapter 12 . 8/31/2019 Awesome chapter. |
Lisa chapter 11 . 8/31/2019 Oh poor Edward. |
Lisa chapter 10 . 8/31/2019 I love this chapter. |
Lisa chapter 9 . 8/31/2019 Exciting chapter. |
Lisa chapter 6 . 8/30/2019 Interesting chapter. |