Aaaaww.. Bel's so sweet!
Good Job author-san!

ME ENCANTA SABER K BELL D ESOS PEKEÑOS DETALLEN TAN LINDO LA HISTORIA VA A CONTINUAR? OJALA K SI USHISHISHI KERO!

Cool ending :)

...This is brilliatly executed- their personalities are perfect!

Gory but cute :D Love 3

aww.. that's so sweet-in a twisted kind of way.

Pocky! 8D

Lol, I always like to point out the obvious too! Just like Fran when he said "Also, I have no money. I spent it all on these groceries, which are currently in my arms, which would prevent me from getting any money I would have. You should try and think more about your targets before trying to mug them.”

I'm always saying stuff like that but no one ever understands me.

Lol, Funny part:

“You forgot my Pocky,” Bel stated, opening a carton of eggs to see if any were cracked. “Who jumped you?”

“I did not forget the Pocky, you never asked for any in the first place, stupid sempai.”

Lol! He never asked for any in the first place, yet he was hoping for some. Ah, but he did get some in the end. And he killed those guys! Fran should've realised that only Vel can stab him. Doesn't he know that he belongs to Bel? XD

This story was cool! I liked it. Ganbatte!

it was adorable and not corny

you my friend are the only person I know that can pull that off ;)

good job :D

Haha! That was so funny, and at the same time cute! I really love the ending, and Fran's come-back to the muggers. :D

This is going on my favorites. :3