I have to admit the zeki part disturbed me... but aside from thateverything was great i neverexpected anything! :)

I love this! If I was Yuuki I would lean out the window and be like "PEACE! I'LL THINK OF YOU WHEN I'M SEXING PEOPLE UP!"

i hope that no of the goods die and when i mean that i'm talking about Kaname, Yuuki, Aidou, Kain, Ruka or Kaien well not Zero either but i hope that someone dies as Sebastian, Takeshi or Midori, but if it's not them it has to be Zero...

you have good talent and i liked it! :)

Nice. I like it.

u hav a dirty mind lol its ok i think all of us r perverted one way or another unless ur a die hard christian .

This was good! How can you leave us hanging like that? I really like this Sebastian character for some reason. I love the line about Zero's spidey senses, haha. And Kaname seems like a real jerk, I rather Yuuki and Zero be together in this story I think. Good job! Please write that sequel!

YEAH!Sorry,Zero just annoys me to hell,I hate hypocrites,really?You hunt vampires for sport because you think they're monsters,then what are you?

I'm not sure I know who's the one that died. It could be Saioji, Zero or Yuuki. Those are the only ones I think who died, LAWLz. The rest . . . . I'm not sure. Great chapter, by the way! Sequel, sequel, sequel! Heh heh heh. A sequel would be nice!

So is this the last chapter then or is there a few more?

more please? :( XD XP

So . . . . the game is over for Yuuki, eh? She's finally returned to Kaname by our lovely Zero, LAWLz! And I thought Sebastian was dead; I guess not. Aww. XD

Only one more chapter left? OMG. I'm going to miss this story. Awaiting for the final chapter!

Eh, I couldn't believe what Zero said at the last line. He saved her only to save his ass from getting killed? LAWLz. Overall, I'm very happy he appeared and rescued Yuuki! I hope he killed those bastards - especially Sebastian! XD

Pity, it wasn't Zero. )-: I wonder who the Hunter's working for. It's not possible for Ruka to send him, as Yuuki stated. Hn. A trap! He's an enemy! O-:

And, I liked Kaname's POV. He's kind of creepy with the way he acted when Yuuki was gone. God, almost killed Hanabusa? (O.O) Oh my . . . .

The Hunter . . . . it's Zero, right? :-D It's such a shame, though, Ruka had to go back to Japan leaving poor little Yuuki alone.

I think my heart's aching now. LAWLz. Can't believe I'm getting emotional . . . . but this story is really good! I'll be reading the next chapters. (-: