Reviews for The Missing Snow Scene
Cara chapter 1 . 12/28/2019
Love this! Favorite line was when goliath strokes her hair, good bit there
ANewStartforMe chapter 1 . 6/30/2019
So heart warming
A Foreign Forerunner chapter 1 . 10/29/2018
This was perfect I love it!
mltrefry chapter 1 . 10/27/2018
So hey, 8 year old story, likely not really paying attention to the reviews, but I wanted to say that this was really good, and one of the very, very few fics I've read where they actually sound like the characters. The dialogue was fantastic, as was the story!
LW12 chapter 1 . 6/11/2018
very good story
Diclonious57 chapter 1 . 3/5/2017
So cute
Peacelovefairy chapter 1 . 7/23/2014
Very good job excellent
Animecartooncomicgirl chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
wonderful
Mishelle20 chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Awesome job.
Anonymous Chibi chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
This is an amazing sweet story! I loved it! Your writing is amazing and I love you you portray Goliath and Elisa. Hope to see more from you!
Diana Prince chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Ah that was a cute story. Poor girl though having to go through that. At least she had Goliath there with her. Good job on the story.
Aistaraina Eruwaedhiel chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
I thought this was really good. You capture Goliath and Elisa really well. I didn't notice any spelling or grammar mistakes. Good job!
London Bai chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
This was- no- IS the perfect scene for Goliath and Elisa. I squee-ed. OH! How I squee-ed!

It was very lovely. Not too much romance, but just enough to send the butterflies in one's stomach to flutter. :D :D :D

Ther perfect episode, too. Not many, there are, that allow Elisa and Goliath to be that close. Well done!
onix greystone chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
Just read it (i know maaaad late)...verdict...I LOVE IT! Seriously your writing skills (descriptive, narrative, characterization) is really, really good. I think if you were to write a novel or a series of short stories, they would be best-sellers. By the way, how is everything with you? Hope you doing well in school (school started for me; going full time & working so I know it can be hard to find time to do things) Can't wait for updates on "Abduction" & "First Conversation". )
PrayerGirl chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Aww so cute!
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