| Reviews for The Missing Snow Scene |
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Cara chapter 1 . 12/28/2019 Love this! Favorite line was when goliath strokes her hair, good bit there |
ANewStartforMe chapter 1 . 6/30/2019 So heart warming |
A Foreign Forerunner chapter 1 . 10/29/2018 This was perfect I love it! |
mltrefry chapter 1 . 10/27/2018 So hey, 8 year old story, likely not really paying attention to the reviews, but I wanted to say that this was really good, and one of the very, very few fics I've read where they actually sound like the characters. The dialogue was fantastic, as was the story! |
LW12 chapter 1 . 6/11/2018 very good story |
Diclonious57 chapter 1 . 3/5/2017 So cute |
Peacelovefairy chapter 1 . 7/23/2014 Very good job excellent |
Animecartooncomicgirl chapter 1 . 6/8/2012 wonderful |
Mishelle20 chapter 1 . 11/8/2011 Awesome job. |
Anonymous Chibi chapter 1 . 7/31/2011 This is an amazing sweet story! I loved it! Your writing is amazing and I love you you portray Goliath and Elisa. Hope to see more from you! |
Diana Prince chapter 1 . 4/21/2011 Ah that was a cute story. Poor girl though having to go through that. At least she had Goliath there with her. Good job on the story. |
Aistaraina Eruwaedhiel chapter 1 . 1/1/2011 I thought this was really good. You capture Goliath and Elisa really well. I didn't notice any spelling or grammar mistakes. Good job! |
London Bai chapter 1 . 12/6/2010 This was- no- IS the perfect scene for Goliath and Elisa. I squee-ed. OH! How I squee-ed! It was very lovely. Not too much romance, but just enough to send the butterflies in one's stomach to flutter. :D :D :D Ther perfect episode, too. Not many, there are, that allow Elisa and Goliath to be that close. Well done! |
onix greystone chapter 1 . 9/7/2010 Just read it (i know maaaad late)...verdict...I LOVE IT! Seriously your writing skills (descriptive, narrative, characterization) is really, really good. I think if you were to write a novel or a series of short stories, they would be best-sellers. By the way, how is everything with you? Hope you doing well in school (school started for me; going full time & working so I know it can be hard to find time to do things) Can't wait for updates on "Abduction" & "First Conversation". ) |
PrayerGirl chapter 1 . 7/28/2010 Aww so cute! |