| Reviews for A Desert Shadow |
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Sieben Nightwing chapter 5 . 8/24/2011 hey, umm, what happened to more chapters? great story and all, few if any mistakes, and an absolutely rediculous and funny character set. I like it, but i'm kinda sad you havent updated in over a YEAR! hope to see another chapter soon. |
naruto91 chapter 5 . 8/16/2011 nice story updated soon |
pinoyboi1 chapter 5 . 1/5/2011 Please update soon this is getting interesting and also I was wondering if you could make the next few chapter a lil bit long then other chapter well keep up the good work and please try not to abandon this story it can be a really good story it could even turn into a series even |
Dark Yellow Dino chapter 5 . 12/11/2010 keep going this is a good story |
raysetiger285 chapter 5 . 12/9/2010 Please dont drop this |
raysetiger285 chapter 5 . 12/7/2010 Im enjoying this. I think you should have gone into more detale with the battle between Bit and Tsukino. P.S Zoids and Naruto/Naruto Shippuden are by far my favourite programs |
lightningblade49 chapter 5 . 8/29/2010 I wish he brought the CAS with some how. |
hypersreak chapter 5 . 7/12/2010 I really like this story but I think it should have more Bit and Liger conversations. Also can Bit and Tsukino understand eachothers zoids? Anyways I'm looking forward to the next chapter please update soon!:) |
Rhavis chapter 5 . 5/15/2010 I like cliff hangers but at times like that I wanna kill somethign XD |
ITman496 chapter 5 . 5/15/2010 okay, yes, this is turning into one of my favorite ever fics. XD You are making the zoids and the personalities so GOOD! 8D And I was never expecting her last name to be flyhight... is that zoid vans bladey? XD Unless you mentioned that earlier and my horrible memory just forgot it ; Well anyway, glad that she likes him. xD and lol, you made my day when you made bit point out that the keycard was upside down. XDDDDDDDD LOL keep up the good work! Your writing is progressively getting better, I mean, this chap was a huge bit longer and better then the others 8D I hope you keep this trend up _ |
LieOfLiving chapter 4 . 5/7/2010 Please don't tell me you've dropped this. Its quite interesting, please pick it back up soon |
Darkened-Storm chapter 4 . 3/31/2010 Hey pretty cool story I only just got into zoids again and started watching and have only just seen episodes 1-10 of new century, but this is looking like a really good story. You write really well ] I will be looking forward to reading more of this and I hope you update soon ] |
Storylover213 chapter 4 . 3/26/2010 dude make more |
Rhavis chapter 4 . 3/24/2010 Oh my fricking GAWD! HOW COULD YOU BE SO CRUEL? It was just getting good! |
ITman496 chapter 4 . 3/24/2010 yay! a new chap! _ And I'm happy to be a faithful reviewer XD Anyway, onto the 'review' I love how you made the bladey so sarcastic toward her. Zoids with an attitude! YEY 8D Keep up the fic, it rocks! |