Reviews for A Desert Shadow
Sieben Nightwing chapter 5 . 8/24/2011
hey, umm, what happened to more chapters?

great story and all, few if any mistakes, and an absolutely rediculous and funny character set. I like it, but i'm kinda sad you havent updated in over a YEAR!

hope to see another chapter soon.
naruto91 chapter 5 . 8/16/2011
nice story updated soon
pinoyboi1 chapter 5 . 1/5/2011
Please update soon this is getting interesting and also I was wondering if you could make the next few chapter a lil bit long then other chapter well keep up the good work and please try not to abandon this story it can be a really good story it could even turn into a series even
Dark Yellow Dino chapter 5 . 12/11/2010
keep going this is a good story
raysetiger285 chapter 5 . 12/9/2010
Please dont drop this
raysetiger285 chapter 5 . 12/7/2010
Im enjoying this. I think you should have gone into more detale with the battle between Bit and Tsukino.

P.S Zoids and Naruto/Naruto Shippuden are by far my favourite programs
lightningblade49 chapter 5 . 8/29/2010
I wish he brought the CAS with some how.
hypersreak chapter 5 . 7/12/2010
I really like this story but I think it should have more Bit and Liger conversations. Also can Bit and Tsukino understand eachothers zoids? Anyways I'm looking forward to the next chapter please update soon!:)
Rhavis chapter 5 . 5/15/2010
I like cliff hangers but at times like that I wanna kill somethign XD
ITman496 chapter 5 . 5/15/2010
okay, yes, this is turning into one of my favorite ever fics. XD

You are making the zoids and the personalities so GOOD! 8D

And I was never expecting her last name to be flyhight... is that zoid vans bladey? XD

Unless you mentioned that earlier and my horrible memory just forgot it ;

Well anyway, glad that she likes him. xD

and lol, you made my day when you made bit point out that the keycard was upside down. XDDDDDDDD LOL

keep up the good work! Your writing is progressively getting better, I mean, this chap was a huge bit longer and better then the others 8D I hope you keep this trend up _
LieOfLiving chapter 4 . 5/7/2010
Please don't tell me you've dropped this. Its quite interesting, please pick it back up soon
Darkened-Storm chapter 4 . 3/31/2010
Hey pretty cool story

I only just got into zoids again and started watching and have only just seen episodes 1-10 of new century, but this is looking like a really good story. You write really well ] I will be looking forward to reading more of this and I hope you update soon ]
Storylover213 chapter 4 . 3/26/2010
dude make more
Rhavis chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
Oh

my

fricking

GAWD!

HOW COULD YOU BE SO CRUEL? It was just getting good!
ITman496 chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
yay! a new chap! _

And I'm happy to be a faithful reviewer XD

Anyway, onto the 'review'

I love how you made the bladey so sarcastic toward her. Zoids with an attitude! YEY 8D

Keep up the fic, it rocks!
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