i am very new to this nature of stories, i enjoy the emotional awakening. Knowing full well that love is transcedent of two people finding each other. I very much enjoyed this story and hopefully you will read mine when i am finally brave enough to do it.

Excellent.
I disagree with Conner having a feminine build of any sort, but that aside, you're dialogue is some of the best I've read in this fandom and the overall story and writing is great. Nicely done.

OMG, this is so amazing. You really captured their voices, is like watching them speaking while I read this story.

One of my favorite fanfictions. Period.

Fantastic! Bravo! BRAVO! Bravo!
Excellent portrayal of characters, emotions, and I love how one part was dedicated to what each brother was going through.
I am hoping and EXPECTING to see more of your work with these two!

Amazing. Just fucking amazing. I could see and feel everything in this story, and when I finished reading the very reality of me actually reading it as a story seemed fake. Your realism is amazing. :D Keep up the great work

This is awesome. Love it, and perfectly written in every way.

This was very well written, I really enjoyed it. I never thought fanfic/ slash could be my thing, but after a couple of stories.. damn, it is. But only for Norman. I haven't read a lot of stories, but this is my favorite by far. Thanks!

And "Ma would never want to sleep with you. Besides she doesn't have a penis." I laughed for solid 10 minutes after reading this :D

loved it.

great chapter.

I really like it. I hope you write more and end up writing Slash, I love me some BDS slash.

Ah, I loved this! Totally individual- You can tell which brother is which just by the tone of the story.

I loved ALL of it!

ha, two amazing things in one. love the rawness and simplicity of your work. very inspiring; bravo

I just wanted to let you know that I absolutely loved this. The speaking voices for Connor and Murphy were right on as well as your imagery of what was going on. You really painted a great picture, their actions being exactly what I would expect in that situation.

I've been out of the slash scene for a while now and this is one of the first things I've read in the last 5 - 6 years. It reminds me why I loved slash in the first place.

Even though this was published about a year ago, I hope I can find more of your work on-line as it really did paint a wonderful and tense picture.

Thanks for the great read!

I absolutely adore this.

Really the way you write this I can picture it all clearly, and the range of emotion you put into this is amazing. Also the little seemly unassuming details - the part about Murphy sleepwalking - made me smile :) you can make the smallest things seem important.

It was completely heartbreaking when they were both freaking out about what happened, Connor's internal dialog especially, and on the first chapter when Connor says the whole sorry I don't feel the same way bit, Murphy's internal dialog for that is just painful. Then when they got together I was just plain giddy. It was seriously cute.

This is probably one of the most well-written stories for the Boondocks Saints on here, and your writing style for this is breath taking.

Wonderful job! 3