Awwwww! That was lovely! You should be very proud. (And I ship Male Shepard and Kelly with a flaming passion, so you know it's good if I like a story with Femshep and Garrus.)

Yay happy endings!

Holy shit, that's one crazy Shepard you've got there!

Nooooo!

Delightful story. Thank you for sharing it.

Interesting take on Female Shepard...I don't think I've read one quite like her anywhere else. I play her as a straight up simple soldier, so it's cool to see how other people think of her.

Your descriptions are great and the action scenes build tension nicely. Overall, great story and nice writing!

Very entertaining story, with an especially delicious and fluffy ending. I liked your take on a very calculating mathmaticiany fshep, and I thought you kept Garrus to his canon personality extremely well. I'm also really liked that you altered the timeliness of there relationship, since obviously all of us shakarian fans don't want to wait until the last mission to get up close and personal with our favorite turian. My only very very tiny crit is about the second kissing sneak attack Shep does, since it seemed to deviate from her logical nature. Still, I adored the first one in the com room, so so much. Overall really great job, keep it up!

I like how you dealt with this story without any kind of big, angsty drama. I enjoyed it quite a bit, especially all the physics references, Tali's counseling and the calculator in Shepard's mind.

By far my favorite scenes were tali's involvement and garrus' "...oh". Such a sweet story. Absolutely loved it and I wish you wrote more. Thank you for writing this.

I really enjoyed this fic, espescially the intense emotions and the inner struggles of Garrus and Erin. Well done!

I really enjoyed this fic! They way Shep and Garrus bond... It's so sweet... Plus, my first Shep was an Infiltrator as well XD

Awesome read. :) Thanks!

I must say, this is one of the best fics for this couple I've read so far. It's just... Awesome. I love your Shepard, how calculative she is. I love her interaction with Garrus as well, and I love the way you write. It was so great to read about Erin's character developement that it made me smile, especially the scene with Tali. usually, in most fics, the characters are mostly static, so this was a fresh take of breath for me. And, dang, the last two chapters just... warmed my heart. The intimacy of it was beautiful. I absolutely adore it.

I also like how you changed perspective through this. Usually I would say that it would be better to emphasize the change of perspective more, so the reader isn't left wondering who's eyes we're seeing from. But really, here the perspective-change flowed and I wasn't left wondering at all. Great job!

(And also great fun to find some physics in here as well ;) )

A.

(and my gawd I'm tired, your fic kept me up, so pardon spelling errors, I'm too tired to be bothered XD)

This story just made me fall in love with Garrus all over again! He's such a sweetheart and cares about Shepard so much.

I have to admit, I'm not all that big on blondes. Mostly since they appear too often in movies to where it's sickening. But here I gotta make an exception. To each their own I guess. It's only the first chapter and I'm already enjoying what you've got. Hopefully the chapters get longer after this one though.

My only real stipulations are blondes and short chapters. Shepard being blonde I can except (depends on the shade I guess) but short chapters? Those just piss me off. But I think I'll just wait for the next chapter to find out if I should be royally miffed with you. Otherwise, I'm pleased with what I'm being presented with. Plus Erin's a good name for your version of Shepard. You can expect to be hearing from me again soon enough.

Keep it up!

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