So Good! I know this was a one shot for a challenge but I would love to see it extended to a short or even a novella. I can see so much potential for this one.

Very nice (and hot)!

I totally understand why this got third place now! This really has to be one of the best Hiei/Kagome fics that I've ever read! Very steamy without being too raunchy, the details were well written. The expression of the feelings felt very real to me.

I loved the dream sequences and I loved how you melded Hiei/Kagome's memories together, this was a really unique way of telling a story! Great job!

I'd love to see other stories by you that are this well written, I hope you write some more soon. I think I only saw one or two misspelled words but they're easily fixed!

Again awesome job RayShippouUchiha!

First off, damn, that was HOT! Second, great story! Well detailed and thought out, I liked it!

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Oh that was amazing I guess why it took third! I loved it there's nothing bad to say about it!

That was intense. The beginning gave me shivers and was extremely deeep. Loved the ending wish there was more

O.O im in awe at how fricken Awesome this story is! Plz write more!

pretty steamy. Hiei doesn't know what is going to hit him. lol

loved it!

This was awesome!

I could honestly say this is the best in depth hiei/kagome storyi have read. and the way you had described the final body, with such less 'seeing' details and focusing on other senses it made it almost hypnotic and very tantalizing. KUDOS!

I LOVED it! Please write and post more fanfics! Thanks!

do i sense a realistic hiei and kagome pairing scenario? Lol, yup yup, I vote YES!

loved it!