Reviews for White Out
RedSS chapter 1 . 9/24/2018
I'm not expecting a continuation of this. This only chapter is the end. Here is the end of the journey of the Johto Champion when she meets the Kanto Champion. The battle that will defy all their adventures. And beyond all, with an amazing writting. Thanks for publishing this.
fluffpenguin chapter 1 . 9/14/2014
nice story, hope you continue this
BlueKnight.EXE chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Interesting pls continue :D
death1500 chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
The red I'm firmileir with I(spelled it wrong) but he had black hair and pure red eyes
Legal Humor chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Chapter 2? Are you not updating this anymore?
Tiny Cherie chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
o_O why aren't you continuing this! WHY! -"
GO AWAY CECILIA chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
Oh my... Oh my gawd... AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING! This was... by far, the most mysterious story... I've ever read... Holy... shit. I had freaking CHILLS the WHOLE TIME! Just... You make Red sound even MORE mysterious than he really IS! And that is HARD TO DO! I am DEFINATLY going to be showing this to people... o_o NICE FRIKEN JOB, MAN!
biory chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
cool story. I hope you update soon.
E-123 Omega mk2 chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
Definitely a story worth keeping an eye out for. Great work thus far. Please update this.
Dreamicide chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Interesting, I'll be keeping watch. Thank you for writing this.
kaori kuni chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
I loved this, just by reading the summary. Now what I feel for this is something way more than that.

I don't know why Red is so cold (All the fanarts I've seen of him are almost scary) and this angry pikachu is one more thing I'm curious about.

I guess I'll have to read the whole manga if I want to know... and I'm just in chapter 30! Poor me.

This Kotone is nice. More... mature? She's serious business. I love that.

Judging by the date of last update... I am left to hope you continue this... I beg you to do so...

Thanks a lot for this fic. It's awesome.
Just Another Smith chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
Very interesting! I'm liking this. Lyra and Red interaction isn't seen too often since she's still pretty new. This story is off to a great start, I look forward to seeing it continued.
Perverted Demon chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
A very interesting take, I would love to see more of this.
Silly Lou chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
Wow! I'm liking this story so far! I'm excited for this story to be updated! So update soon please!
HeroGuardian chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
I like how this story's looking so far. Going through Kotone's whole journey and leading up to her encounter with Red is a great way to start this story! Keep it up!
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