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I am so intrigued for this FF Story. I love the chemistry between LoLa & Michael & their Daughter also the Jackson Family. It is so hilarious to the point that I was nearly rolling on the floor laughing when they were having their annual Water Fights & other practical jokes. I have never known about the saran wrap in the door way...Awesome joke..I love it :D

I was also wondering if their is another chapter or did you finish the story?

omg u need to keep writting ur stories please im a huge fan!

I am happy that Lola is better and they still get a son named micheal. please update soon.

I really like this story and its really really good. I was sad when i read she had cancer but they removed it. YAY! So now they are going back to a family and it is so good she is back to herself. I wonder howNeveah will take it? Keep going please!

awww that is so sad. Please make the next chapter.

OMG, like i siad I have read this 5 times. I have ideas now! Ill inbox u!

Had I have had internet I'd have read this sooner! OMG! I-I am unbelievably sad! I mean, I'm glad Lola survived but...I'm SO upset that the baby didn't make it! I can't imagine going through something like that...and now...Lola's lost two sons. I feel so bad for her...feeling the loss of a child all over again...that's pretty rough. And Michael...oh my god Michael...h-he loves children so much, I can only imagine the kind of heartbreak he's going through. God, I ACTUALLY started crying at the part of the miscarriage. It's just so unfair. They were so happy and excited and JASON freaking ruined everything! I swear to god I hate that man so much! He's absolutely terrible, putting Annie through hell and now killing Michael and Lola's son! Bullcrap! Something bad needs to happen to him. You don't just abuse someone and kill a child and get away with it! God I hate him, just the thought of that character makes me sick! Poor Annie, Poor Lola, and Poor Michael! Wonderful chapter but an incredibly sad one. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read more! :)

P.S. Even though you typed "No pun intended" when Michael asked "Annie are you ok?" I couldn't help but chuckle. It was quick, short chuckle but I still chuckled a bit.

i love this chapter..im so happy that you updated...when i saw this on the top of my favorite list i immediately stop whatever i was doing and read it...im soo sad that Lola lost the baby i cried when the doctor gave them the news and i soo want to kick Jason ass excuse my language i cant believe he did that i know the Jackson brothers are soo going to get him when they find out what happen.. so can't wait till u update again :)

I luv aaaall of your stories they are just AMAZING!:D hope you can update soon I'm not rushing you but Im just saying well fantastic job ;D

I loved it! This chapter was great. All the pranks were so funny! Go girls! Lol. I cried though, when I read about Annie. Nothing like true family to help you out of a horrible situation like that. I wanted to review this sooner but I had to leave when I found out you'd updated. I was sad. :( But anyways, really loved it and I can't wait to read more! Keep up the amazing work. _

greeat chapter :) i love how they are all so strong as friends :D and Michael's sense of pranking ;)

awesome chapter! update again when you can please!

this was...AWESOME!OMG i cant wait for chapter seven! :)

omfg i love this chapter plzzz keep writting plzz u have 2 this story is amazing plzzz keep me posted. luv ya-michaeljacksonfan-jeaninereach

omfg this story is amazing i hope u keep writting to complete this 1 n even write more i am a fan of ur amazing writting.