That story was amazing! I absolutely loved it!

2nd one-so I have a question...I know that in a flashback of Karin's we see her during this chuunin exam in the forest of death. Did we ACTUALLY get a glimpse of her way back during the actual exam and i've just failed to see it every time? just curious. Good way to get her in on this, though.

And I hate to say it, but Nozomi always was a little TOO omnescient. Just a little. it's still fun, though. :)

Sorry it's been so long. I'll try to read a chapter every day or so until I'm caught up on the whole series. Looks like it's been a while since you updated. Did you finish the whole thing or just get started on another book for it?

Anyway, this chapter:

Looks like at this point you didn't plan anything between Kabuto and Nozomi. They seem alot more distant and unknown to each other now than they do later. Interesting how we start out withOUT some ideas that come to us later, and of course, the need to adjust as those new ideas come.

Interesting way to start off getting Kin and Nozomi to be friends, and certainly some truth to the main difference between villages. I suppose most of the differences that exist are in the individual shinobi themselves...

umm...shouldn't that be Shikamaya saying 'i hate these love things.'? 'Cause Xia's the one that just sped to the end of the hall, i think.

On that note, I love Xia's crush. That's another one where I can't remember a THING about how it turns out! I hope Lee notices her...

Great chapter, and actually, part of why I've been gone so long is due to reading a deviant art doujin (sp?) called the NaruHina chronicles. i think you'd like it. Here's the link to page one:

art/NHC-Volume-1-159826268

It's pretty good stuff, I think. I may actually like it better than the real series, and even though it's closed right now, he is usually open to art requests for OC's...like say, Nozomi etc. Check it out.

I gave my thoughts on grammar etc in the other one, so I'm not gonna repeat it here. Straight to the good stuff!

love the eaves dropper getting on the other eaves dropper's case. *Grin* It was very cute how Sumi and Aoko had their little sibling spat. I've participated in several of those myself. My little bro and I LOVE doing that, but it annoys everyone else when we do it so we try to reserve it for 'little bro big bro' time. 'Course, he's on a mission right now, so I haven't gotten to debate with him in over a year... :(

Great chapter. Hopefully I can catch up soon. Meanwhile I need to remember to suggest this story to my girlfriend. I think she'd really like it, and that would be another reviewer for you!

ah, so Nozomi doesn't know about the time travel thing yet. How many chapters away is that...ah, i'll find out again soon.

Anyway, nice talk with baa-chan there. I always liked the idea that TsuJir had a 'night' and that was how Minato came about. it's true that his hair color is like Tsunade's and is styled like Jiriaya's. And it would explain why Naruto looks so reminiscent of the Sage of the Six Paths when he's using the kyuubi's chakra these days. but back to the CURRENT story (sry) I like how Nozomi doesn't like Sasuke, but it hurts to think of what he does later on. Very sad and depressing. And why did she start coughing...I remember there was a reason for that, but what WAS it? (rhetorical)

Last thought, I noticed a couple minor spelling errors in this chapter, so if you have to time might what to edit and update. Can't remember where they were, but it was only a couple anyways.

hmm, that is a nice poem. I'm actually kinda glad right now that it's been so long since I was reading this 'cause I couldn't remember what happened to Zabuza and Haku. Reviews are better if the reader doesn't know completely what's coming, don't you think?

Loved the poem, but I think my favorite part was Nozomi totally pulling a Bee thing and writing in the middle of battle. That was great; heehee.

A 'squart' doesn't exist. It's called a skort. It's just a little confusing if people are making different names for them.

so sad i want to cry soz i didn't reveiw before
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Nice good job the stroy was amazing I hope the sequel is almost over otherwise I would go crazy waiting for it! LOL!

This chapter was great it made me want to cry good work!

Lol that was great! Funny ending to! LOL

Nice even though I was hoping it would have Naruto cheering on Hinata and encourage part was in it I guess this was ok as long Naruto and Hinata end up together!

That is pretty cool everyone is bonding!

Yeah I was right! The next match is against 2 teammates AWESOME!