Hey I think that 'Naru-chan' should not have the mask cuz it kinda makes him to Hatake clan like... But thats just me

Dude they're only fourteen and having sex already? I don't think someone so young can have such intense feelings to have sex.

U literally took the meaning of the story and crushed it. I understand that dis is ur story but wats the point of writing when naruto can beat pain right now as he is. Ur characters are way over powered when naruto is a story about hard work and struggles.

It's really awesome so far keep up the good work

hahahahaha I like the lemon it's good but the dialogue at the sex scene has a little bit corny feeling or something

I'm not reading this I just saw the story and I have to say your mind is screwed with your sick fantasies

Where's the new chapter?

What happen after this? Will Sasuke really will kill Itachi just like in canon? Or not...? Please update! I beg of you

Where are you!? I know I'm being selfish ._. But why aren't you updating !? I have waited long enough...well actualy this is my first time reading this and I love it! Please update and don't give up on this story. I need you Author San ...I mean I don't need you as in physically cause that be wierd since this is my first time reviewing ,but I need you ...to update :)

Sincerely, Selfish girl who still waits for an update.

Update update update update

Bwahahaha orochimaru die you monster!
OMG I can't stop my body shaking in excitement
I can't wait for the next chapter

That Ino-letting-go-of-Sakura scene had me bawling ;-; Amazing Story BtW

What happen to itachi and naruto?

You did an excellent job on this chapter! I would also like to say that I would like to see more between Shikamaru and Neji.

When are you going to put up the next chapter? It's getting really good.