That’s slot of languages to remember

There are too many people trying to control Balthezar and I don’t know if I’ve got the heart to keep reading this.

Mm,m,m,m,m,m,:m,m,m,m,m',m,m,m'!m

Good

Is the Glacial Eagle gonna die. Please don't kill it. Please

I read a little of the prologue and i think i just threw up in my mouth a little. Lilly/voldy? god that's disgusting. I dont know how u can sleep at night with things like this running in your head.

excellent story

Weird...

Great story. A couple of inconsistencies. Shouldn't more than just Pandora have noticed about the imposter Ambrosia. Shouldn't she have been cast out of the forest when Balthezar renewed the spell on the forest, as she did intend to do harm? Also, it had seemed like you were setting it up for an eventual Balthezar/Blaise pairing, but then just totally ignored it at the end.

Even with that, I did still enjoy it greatly.

Fantastic story. I love how you didn't, for lack of a better term, dump the languages partway through.

Great plot and a pleasant read.

Balthesar was a good name, it felt just right. :-)

Thank you for the great story

good story

Very nice, great story!
A bit unexpected he didn't fight in the battle after the younger Balthezar went back in time.

Great story! Look forward to the next one.

I like the chapter