"and James still owes me a rematch for those darts last Friday. But –"

She stared at him, then cut him off briskly.

"Wait a minute. You play darts with the Trickster? I thought he was in psych ward!"

A smile that didn't quite reach his lips was dancing in his eyes. "He is. They're the soft kind."

"Oh.""

I love the description of his smile. So often smiles are things that don't reach the eyes, but here it's the other way around!

I also am very happy that Janet and Len love each other, although it's the kind that may be trickier to see _
She *knows* her husband- why he does things, what names he does and doesn't like, how to help him(that last line about Sam and the mirror)- and she loves him.

This was wonderful!
I came here from a fialleril DC fic- she recced it in the comment section :D
So glad I followed up on that recommendation! :)

This is a nice fan fiction unlike most hero’s Flash actually has compassion and he’s a guy you want to be friends with, happy, funnny and determined. I sort of wish I could have a mindset like him. It was nice to read I just wished we saw this side of him more in live action

That was touching and well thought out. Flash was always my favorite hero because of how he treated his rogues, and how he was one of the few leaguers who felt like an actual person. Thank you for making Janet, and thank you for writing this. I enjoyed it, even reading Flash's lines out loud.

Awesome one shot.

Love this every time I read it. No Sues here.

Janet wasn't sue-ish at all, and in fact a very believable and cool woman(no pun intended). This was such a nice, well paced read, and you did fine capturing the Flash too.

Great fanfic!

Great fic!

You took a brief mentioning of a nameless character and not only gave her a personality but a believable personality. I love writers who can do this

quite good.

I didn't relate so much to the female character, but I did sympathize with her. She wasn't a Mary Sue. She was pragmatic and thoughtful. Her bitterness was part of her character and didn't seem like total 'bitchness' which was nice. I liked the ending as well.

THAT WAS BRILLIANT. First, I really don't think you went Mary Sue on us. I thought Janet was a brilliant character, and you really made her fit in amongst the cannon characters. Speaking of canon characters, they were all so IC it was kind if scary, in a completely brilliant way. The entire fic was great from start to finish, and I wish it could have been longer/a whole novels worth of story! Well done on a great piece:)

I loved this.
It was very sweet and not a perspective I've ever considered before.
Thanks for the story and keep up the good writing!

This is classic, DCAU Wally West/Flash. This reminded me of that JLU episode with Flash and Batman in Central City for the opening of The Flash Museum. Flash is the only one I can think of that is personable not only with the "normal" people, but with his villains as well- even going as far to check up on them in between stints in jail when they're not trying to kill him.

This was fantastic! I never thought of what the Rogue's spouses would be like before.