I loved your story, it Was very entertaining and enjoyable thanks for sharing xx

Wow very action packed, so any liens to unpack

He does have a bit of a temper hmmmm

Loving your story so far

Such a good story. I laughed out loud each chapter.

Edward must be dumb af. She said she was in Forks with Jasper, the guy he acknowledges went to high school with him and he still hasn’t put two and two together.

Bella Stork, LMAO! I’m dead.

Bella may have been mean in the way she was scheming but Edward was just cruel with his parting words.

I don’t trust Demetri. He is the manager at Touch&Go, goes over to Satyr, then Bella finds him on the office computer. I know...he is the manager and has access to the club’s business info, but still, I don’t trust him. Is he spying on both clubs before opening his own or for someone else?

Thinking back to when Edward spurned Bella’s advances, there are two reasons why in my mind. One, Charlie threatened the hell out of him. Two, Edward secretly liked Bella and didn’t want to sully her.

Further back in chapters...in one Bella wasn’t wearing any underwear because she left them at Mike’s when she snuck out, then went to her bar. Suddenly she had underwear on again. ;)

Love this story! I want to throttle the little shithead Seth. May I? Please?! Jasper is such a wuss. Emmett has a big mouth. Lol Rose whipped him good. Bella has slipped up several times so when is Edward going to think about the slips and figure it out? Being rhetorical here.

LOL I love this story! At some point Edward might figure out who Bella is, but for now I love her quick wit and scheming.

Loved Hate Me, it was awesome.

Lol you're such a bad writer. Goodbye

...I don't mean to sound sexist when I say that guys are easy. If Bella was as attractive as you've described then she doesn't have to spend all night chasing an average looking guy and practically agreeing to marry him to get him to have sex with her. Just ask a guy who's by himself in a club "you wanna have sex?", and mostly likely they'll be like "hell yeah." This is very juvenile so far. I'm suspecting that this is written by a teen.

C est une idée absurde que émet se ligue contre son frère pour amusement il ferait mieux de revoir son jugement