I thought that this was a great story. It fits in with the progress of both relationships in the game and you portrayed Morrigan's personality really well.

I did however think that Leliana was more coy in the game but it didnt take away from how well this was written. Good job!

I like this story. It was sweet and innocent along with Morrigan's POV. I liked how the Grey Warden's first night was and how sensitive Leliana was with him.

Sweet, funny, steamy...what more could one ask for?

Thomas is absolutely adorable, and Morrigan's musings are both funny and bittersweet.

Great job!

Ooh, I have to admit this one had my cheeks and ears flushing a little bit! Nicely done, especially with Morrigan's perspective.

You should share this with the Leliana Appreciation Society on the Bioware Social Network; I'll probably pimp it on Maker's Breath, too. There's not a lot of Leliana m/f works aside from my own on there right now, so I'm sure a few members would enjoy seeing something different. :)

If I was Morrigan ... in that situation... I probably would have left a lucky bird present on the warden... if you catch me drift...

or turn into a spider and bite him

XD

good work though

This was a pleasure to read!

I have to say I was laughing and giggling like some idiotic schoolgirl the entire time.

The romantic/sensual scene with Leliana was great. Your PC is a loveable shy guy it seems.

What makes this story even better is the vexation of Morrigan. Even when you switched perspectives to follow Leliana and Thomas I knew what she must have been thinking the entire time.

Great story!

I liked this. What an amusing perspective to take. It's very original, certainly. I almost feel sorry for Morrigan in a way. She's pretty clueless sometimes when you really think about it.

And I love the sensuality between Thomas and Leliana. It was both sexy and adorable, especially Thomas' shyness and Leliana being the risque Bard she is.

Well I think that...nah, you know what I think ;)