I just want to point out there that people like that reviewer really annoy me. There is no need to be horrible to an author on any site, especially as they write these things for the enjoyment of themselves and others. I love the fact you put that review up, its a good little bit of shaming. Spirk and Spork are common terms, even Zachary Quinto himself referred to Spock and Kirk as Spirk in an interview for Star Trek Into Darkness (I have no idea of you have seen it or not, but it is highly amusing). I am enjoying this and I am sure many other people do to. Keep writing. :)

Nuuuu I didn't realize that this was abondened till it was too late! :'( I won't ask u to update this since u don't want to just know that this was really awesome cool and I loved it

the phrase is ' bat shit crazy' love, but i just find it super hot when Spock goes all possessive and territorial around Jim

I'm sorry to read that you abandoned it. The fic is marvelous. I'm not gonna tell you to not abandon it, because I'm a writer too and I know how does it feels... So... If some day you decide to come back, I'll read it with a lot of joy. Thanks for your work.

Hey I was going to say that Kirk is a bit hysterical for a starship captain, dont you think? but after the flaming flammer I guess not. sorry you got such an obnoxious person trying to bum your trip. seriously not cool. I went to a couple of the toughest art school in NYC and constructive critiques, tho sometimes uncomfortable, are really useful. But not to anyones taste, not everyone wants total honesty. However your attacker was totally out of line. I can assure you that as a card carrying Trekker for 50 years, you have a right to enter into Gene Roddenberry's vision of an inclusive future and do with it what you will.

Rise newbie, write your stories and welcome to the world of Trek. By the way I think you have pontential.

If I were you I would tell that Troubled Tribble ahole where to put their mean spririted, over-reacting "review" and I use the term review loosely. No one shld ever let something as stupid as flipping FANFICTION get them that angry.

Good luck with everything!

With a fanfic with this kind of treatment, I am surprised that Spock hasn't entered some kind spontenaeous, poorly-explained Pon Farr.
Do you know what Pon Farr is?
No, it's not the opposite of Pon Near.
You'd have a field day with it.
T'Pol out.

Picture this:
Wrinkly and shriveled old man Nimoy (that's Spock Prime's actor if you didn't know already) walking in on Chris Pine being sandwiched between Zachary Quinto and Karl Urban- all 3 of them being naked with their p e nises just dangling out.
And Old Man Nimoy just smiles.
T'Pol out.

I understand that you got on Star Trek with the reboot (I did so too, but with Into Darkness), but this isn't excuse to write every character as out-of-character as possible. No, Bones doesn't hug Jim out of la nada; Jim shows a much more strong facade, as his phylosophy revolves around "Being strong and placing myself before the crew in order to keep them safe, and happy even if I am not happy". In fact, in order to Jim actually show what he's feeling a lot of prying into his mind is to be made.
Also, it is highly illogical of Spock to show so much emotions without a big external stimuli, especially with moving his lips. In fact, I find that your Spock has a resenblance to Mirror!Spock from The Original Series.
Selek/Spock Prime is kinda well, except that, as wisened as he is, he has realized that his Jim has been *dead* for decades-Yes, Spock Prime lived longer than his Jim Kirk, as humans can live up to 100 years and Vulcans can live 50% to 100% more than that (200 years if my knowledge has not failed).
Oh, and please look up how to write Scotty's accent- I can hear the chant of the Cthulu in the horizon.
Yes, you do have a fair amount of readers who like the story, but it's never a bad thing to strive to be better.
Live Long and Prosper,
T'Pol out.

Okay I have to say this one makes me a little sad. :(
But I will keep my eyes open for when you start writting this one again. :)

Well, Bones surely could have said something ironic hahaha the smut was nice, but it could be better, you could focus more on their feelings during that, not just on what was happening. I am truly shocked by the review you received, ignore the idiots. I am enjoying your fic pretty much. Oh, may I ask if Bones will give any kind of explanation about the "share"?

Good luck with your personal life. I know how draining it is to be a caregiver.

For the first time, spock is actually supporting and helping jim. That's good since he cut off all jim's other means of support.
Yes, i like your kyle. He would be good with bones. Or jim.

I really want to like this. I don't mean to leave reviews that might be negative...
But again, spock told kirk he would be fine with kirk being himself, he's just not allowed to touch vulcans.
Now that kirk is back at the place of his worst nightmares, death, starvation, pain... He's not allowed to be comforted by a friend who went through the same thing - all because he has to consider *spock's* 'emotions'.
Again, now that bones is no longer available for jim's emotional support and spock is unable/unwilling to provide emotional support he blocks kirk from getting it platonically from a friend. He pulls kirk away from his grief and makes jim attend to spock's temper tantrum to prevent possible violence on a governor.
Spock's being really unreasonable. He's ensuring that jim's needs aren't met, that he is miserable and stressed and receives no comfort and now forces jim to attend spock's selfish demands.