Good start, I'm curious if Namine put Axel up to this though. I hope you'll continue.

Well shit, you really drew me into this one! I was loving where this was going...I know you'll probably not finish this but I'm going to go with Namine hired Axel to kill Roxas but instead Axel is running off with him. Or something like that XD. Thanks for writing anyhow - I literally tore through this wondering how it was gonna end! Really great writing (:

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Waaah oh gosh this is just so cool! I love the plot! * q * and the theme reall seems to fit the two :''D oh and I really hate Namine in this- :''D ahh and I really wanna see what happens next please update soon? ; 7 ; ))/

Ah I loved it !

It was such a good chapter. Is there going to be anymore?

You're such an amazing writer!

Oh man oh man.

Omnomnom awaits?

Can't wait to read more. I love the plot line. It is quite very entertaining.

This seriously needs the second part. *swoon* Axel sounds so freaking dangerous in this, like kinda a good dangerous. Namine and Marluxia, huh? Sounds like she has a part in why Axel is pointing a gun at Roxas.

When I had read the desciption, I will admit... I wasn't that interested. So I left the alert in my inbox for when I got bored later, because it's by you, and I figured I'd probably become interested in it if it's by you.

Well, I just finished cleaning out my inbox, found the alert again, say it was written by you and clicked it open. Because I'm sorta bored and too tired to think properly (and I have to stay up, too, dang it!) but I started reading it and thought, "I'm so glad I kept the alert!"

I'll admit, suspense has never been my genre, I prefer slice of life and mystery the most. This though, I think you took it to a new level or something. I mean, I've seen this stuff before (the not getting along with wife/she's cheating, meets hot new stranger and-oh damn) but, I don't know. I think it was Demyx's parts, and probably the part at the end when Roxas still has an attitude, even with a gun pointed at him! xD

So, yeah, like I was saying, really like it. Can't wait for you to finish the second part!

Oh, now I definitely hope there will be more of this! What will happen next? :o

Oh...Namine hired Axel to kidnap her husband! I wonder what she offered him and what exactly did she tell him to do...I can't wait for the next chapter!

omg this is so cool! im dying o read what happens next, plese update soon, this plot has a lot of potential! :D

I think I'm seeing what your writing style and preferences are, now that I've read four of your stories...Cool. Once, again, very well-written. :D

-Hana

oh i am very intersted to see how this turns out :) I love how you wrote Axel's and Roxas's personality. It suits them well and not OC at all! Keep up the good work i cant wait for the next chapter. Their sexual tension is killing me :D

I love this. Like, seriously, I will maul you with a spork if you do not get the second half out soon.

Please, this is great. I can't wait for the next part.