I love it I really do and I sincerely expect more! Because you are just talented

Please finish this!

This is a really good story too bad it's been four years

please please please can u update your stories soon please

Hey can you please update this one. Inlike alibis stories but his is my fav. Please? ily

you swore it would be finished, so when will you be updating? Please update!

I LOVE THIS STORY! I have'nt read one like it yet... I look forward to the next chapters!

This one will be finished, huh? Hahaha, I'm just kidding, but really, where's that update we are all looking forward to? I have never been a huge fan of NCIS (I'm more of a Monk/Psych person), but this story has sparked my interest and I just might watch a little more NCIS now and then... Anyways, I think you did splendidly with the characters and plot. I really liked Carlisle's theory as to why Claire grew faster. I always wondered about the logic behind the growing with Renesmee and this just cleared up practically all skepticism!

I remember, when I was reading the first chapter and Alice spotted Bella and started walking to her table, I was thinking, " Alice, no! You're going to ruin everything!" over and over again. But then it all worked out...kind of... Bella's story is awesome and I really like how you played with it.

All I have to say is...you really know how to keep a person reading, that is for sure.

Please update soon!

Witty:)

This is like the third time I've read it! It gets better every time! I will hold you to that promise! You swore on your grave! Please please please please please please please please update!

I love NCIS! This is pretty good so far, but the only thing that doesn't really make sense is why would NCIS be busting a drug dealer? They investigate Naval crimes, not set up stings for drug lords. So I'm a little confused about that. Other than that I like it :)

You are -by far- one of the most talented authors that I have ever come accross on FF. Please finish this story! It is so creative and has so much promise...and you swore on your grave! Update soon!

Lots of Love,

Sophie

This is great! Update soon, please!

oh wow i am so glad you continued this! Its well...this chapter certainly explains alot and yet at the same time still leaves some mysteries. i love how you have Carlisel's behaviour in this, his hesitance and discomfort, as well as Bella's fear, anxiety and then the decision she makes. I dont like to compare one persons work to another but I gotta say, this is one of those ones wherein you wish others would follow by example: it isnt completely centered on her, she doesnt just spill her heart out, the pain and hinted horror can almost be felt through this rather than just seen in passing, it holds a 'real' kind of feel to it and its not over the top nor too little detail...honestly its spot on. I really hope you continue this

i can not wait for more! :)

awesome story, i love ncis! Can't wait to see how this plays out, I"ll look for the updates