I see the erotica.

Lovely job.

Keep it up! 8DDDDD

OMG I LOVED THIS SO MUCH

Damn, Double d is such a slut. I hope there will be another call soon ;}

Oh my, is there going to be another chapter! This is awesome :)

*nose bleed* best thing ever!

Hoooooooooooooooot...o.o

lol u got them perfect lol i can see it

love it!

So great...I was getting so into it by the end. When I started reading from "Just thinking about it now makes me wanna touch myself" down, sure enough my dad knocks on my door. I'm all flustered and wait patiently for him to tell me what he was going to tell me, he leaves. Okay, second attempt, here we go...reading reading "I'm driving you crazy, huh?" Another knock, by this point I'm like "skfhasldkjfslkdjfslkdfj!" and laughing my ass off while both of my parents are standing in the doorway.

Anyway, I absolutely love how in-character these two are in your fics, and I adore how Eddy uses "my sockhead" as his affectionate term for Double D. Your writing is very well done, it varies and doesn't repeat itself. :)

OMG! Imagining adorable, innocent little Double D doing those dirty things, is devouring my childhood, but I don't give an Ed about it at all at the moment.

So...hot...! *pants*

OH MY GOD THAT WAS PERFECT

Ooh, this is incredible. While reading this, I had to pause several times to absorb the awesome and giggle insanely. A writer who can make you visualize and form a mental picture definitely has talent. No, I'm not trying to sound like a pervert imagining all the 'dirty' stuff. Please don't think that, aha. You're certainly very detailed with the characters and you know them so well. I just can't describe how great this story is, I hope you continue writing. I really enjoyed this, thanks for posting it. Reminds me of how much I miss Ed, Edd n Eddy. The mature content wasn't that bad, I didn't mind it :D

Holy crap... that was... really good. And as you said, it was erotic, and not some trashy porn. Extremely well done.

Huh. Wish I could see a sequel. ;D

Baby. Aww. Too adorable. I really enjoyed this story, i'm kinda new to Double D and Eddy fan fiction and i can't really find many (which makes me very sad) but this was really cute, exactly how i think the boys would be and i love how you have Eddy cheeky and crass but not overly so and you portrayed Double D (my favourite) so well, cute, sweet, well mannered and so so naughty *sigh love* well done keep it up.

Love always,

Clara. Xxx

P.s. If you can point me to any good sites for Double D x Eddy fan fiction i would love you forever. Xxx

Well... 2 o'clock in the morning and I'm reading Eddy/Edd stories... what is wroong with me? Oh well... I love the story very very much! :3