I cry

I love DJ

I think Splendid is the killer. ecause when he got hit by the car he said not again and he broke the handcuffs.

I still think you should write a movie dude at least submit something to a publisher.

I highly doubt your going to let anyone live. All these good characters die trying well some of them good, some were just corrupt and used for the Butcher's amusement, a sadistic bastard he is but I do hope he dies (if he does), he dies in something either unexpected or insanely mind-blowing.

Please continue to write, I know this takes time, effort, and sheer will plus a fucked up mindset to write this. But I mean this will all good intentions c:

Hope to see more, possibly the ending!

Another captivating installment to this astonishing work of literature. Your writing connects to the reader in an ever so spellbinding way , and i can easily see you becoming an esteemed writer. Don't you just love how Rager didn't shoot the Butcher as soon as he showed his face? Had i been in hes position, I would have shot both his legs a multitude of times, then reloaded, and shot his arms the same amount of times, then tortured him, and nailed him to the docks, alive but barely. Then left a note explaining who he was. Should have used your brain to minimize your pain. If they had disbelieved your note, and thought you to be the Butcher, jail time would have been worth it riiiight? :D. Anyway, I wait in anticipation to see how you can milk 3 more chapters out of this. However you do it, i know they'll be a marvelous read. And good luck to you in writing your other stories.

This somehow gets even more amazing, can't believe it's nearly over!

I swear you should be writing for movies. This is getting better and better

awe-inspiring... its worth the wait..

lol why dud giggles stop him? i don't think that she quite grasps the severity of their situation. when your on an island with a murderous bastard and you've captured his acopmlice you have to be willing to make him want the sweet release of death in exchange for information. What a pussy :3. I'm glad that rager didn't call off the backup. Most likely because he would have continued to kill them off anyway. And i find it weird how ruffy stopped after he hit an unidentified figure, when he had full knoladge of the fact that everyone important were back at the hostpital. it could have been DJ but he figured he was there too. what he should have done was ran him over again xD. But people have gotta die some how so w/e. but anyway. People are gonna live?! holy shit. now that was a mindfuck. though judging from the tone i predict that the butcher will be among the living. by the way, those of you who didnt get the brick joke in chapter 28, it was when nicky's head fell off and licked her elbow. she tried to do that in an earlier chapter. which i can do without my head cut off. but it hurts like hell. Great chapter as always Master of the Mindfuck! I look forward to the remaining chapters of this wonderful story. and possibly aero's asphyxiated corpse making cameo at the massive barial service that might or might not be held in memoriam of all how died in this horrible massacre! okai. bai _!

GASP! Oh my Celestia, an update! I feel so happy I could just explode! Let's get to it!

*9 minutes later*

*sigh* You ever get that feel when you wanna punch a wall, but don't in fear of making a hole? Yeah, I get it all the time.

*laughs* Toothy, you dumb bastard. You know who Flippy was, yet you continue to...*pinches bridge of nose* Dickheads, these days.

I'm just gonna say it here and now. The Broadshore Butcher has to be none other...than Splendid! I mean, you heard him mutter "Not again." after being hit by the car. Jake, you cynical bastard! xD

*sheds single man tear at the scene with Rager and Ruffy*

He was a good lad. I suddenly feel bad.

Rager, don't be a fool! While I'm glad to see you being badass, but chances are that you're gonna die, mate. (But die a fucking hero, i bet.)

Welp, that's enough typing for today. Hope you start feeling better. Now, to DeviantArt!

An update! Finally an update! Pbfft. I dunno why I'm getting all excited for but I think yours is the reason for all that. Spot some grammar mistakes- Not that I care, since this chapter is another engaging...chapter. Right, I'm still surprised that DJ's dead and he ain't gonna come back to life but yeah, what can ya expect? It's how things should unfold right?

Well, I'm not surprised Evil surfaced. Kind of expected him to appear eventually even if it was a short scene. Gotta say Toothy made a big mistake trying to act all Smart-ass on Flippy, Evil probably lost his nerves; Not liking the idea that some normal guy who he knows nothing of, knows him the best. Le ouch when the punch striked down.

Yeah, kind off stupid of Ruffy to get out and approach the butcher guy unarmed. Then again, pretty brave (though in this case, noblely stupid) to tell Rager to ignore the threat. The guy's as good as dead since there's nothing much he can do anyway. Seems like Rager wants revenge on the butcher guy. Want him Mr Policeman? Then shall we play a game of hide and seek? At least, that was what I had expected to hear. (I should seriously stop thinking about those kind of stuff)

Well I'm pretty sure you know what I'm going to say in this review after you've done readin' that whole thing. In fact, I'm kind of surprised that I typed all those down. I was never the type to pay attention to any details. I'd just read and pretend nothing ever happened. (Pretty cruel for some author/ess who worked their ass off to make a chapter)

Oh well, another splendid chapter though it's pretty short. Still a darn good chapter to read nonetheless. I expect another update soon since the end is nearing. (For this story obviously)

Okay, I think this is the part where I send in this review and get my much needed sleep. Till the next chapter; Good Luck and see you soon.

YES YOU'RE BACK

sorry i'm happy hehe. nice chapter

Well, the least you did was update and not abandon the story!

Well, let's get on with the review shall we?

Right. So Toothy is uhm...finally caught and uh...wait. DJ's dead? Killed by that Butcher guy? Well...I had expected him to die but...a flare gun? Seriously? Didn't see that one coming.

Poor guy. But from what I read, DJ must truly have been one cynical bastard to have killed lota of people. Though ironically enough...he too was killed...by a bastard. Though the thing that irks me the most is that the identity of the killer was almost revealed!

-lets out a long frustrated sigh-

So close yet so...damn it. I shall wait for the next chapter then. Better than never updating right?

Damn... I thought that bastard had finally got what he deserved. but at least they got toothy right? :P. your really good at manipulating what the reader feels. Your a very talented writer, and i can see you becoming a renowned author someday. can't wait till the next chapter! :D

Absolutely can't believe that DJ died ;_;

Don't feel so bad about not updating quickly, you never fail to put out a captivating chapter. It's always worth the wait!