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  Guest chapter 23 . 6/12 Liked this one a lot. So deep and sad yet wholesome at the same time :’) |
| Guest chapter 18 . 6/11 AHHH SO ADORABLE |
 Marinara the Sauce chapter 13 . 6/11 This was such a sweet chapter. It’s so great how you make these characters deeper and richer by adding these little nuances to their personalities. |
| Marinara the Sauce chapter 6 . 6/10 Ahhh this is so cute! |
| Happy Anon chapter 15 . 12/30/2019 Reading through all of your work, and the way that you wrote this chapter in particular is exquisite. I love the subtext of Mustang and Hawkeye's conversation. Really incredible chapter! |
| Eagle Dreamer chapter 28 . 12/9/2019 I loved this chapter |
| SakuraS41 chapter 20 . 10/19/2019 This is just so beautiful.. Really love this chapter. The first half was already so good, we could see the dynamics of the group and how close they are. But the second half just brings it to another level... I really admire your writing and how you bring them to life. |
| SakuraS41 chapter 1 . 10/18/2019 Awww... Anything with Hughes is bound to be good :D |
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 29 . 10/14/2019 This is an incredibly entertaining fic! Not just the humour in most chapters, but also that you really get into the characters themselves very well, with excellent insight! Also portray them very well too, which is good writing Suggestion: Jake, Callie, and Nessa meet Winry, and eavesdroppers realize they are trying to determine if she is 'worthy' of Ed. Also meet Ed's dad, and decide they have a blank cheque to do whatever they want to him. Finally, Izumi hears about Ed having students, and belatedly realizes that he has been going to extreme (heroic) lengths to keep them away from her...so she decides to pay a visit; fortunately for Ed (sorta) they are away when Izumi drops in on him. Been some fics where Roy has to go undercover as Ed's dad, but what about one where Hawkeye has to go undercover as Ed's mom? |
| LoveFanFictionForLife chapter 1 . 9/17/2019 Awesome |
| Vi-Violence chapter 16 . 8/21/2019 This had me giggling almost the whole time. |
| Kishinakutskikronoslvl78killa chapter 29 . 8/14/2019 Love. All of my love goes into this story. Literally the first FMA story o can honestly say I am wholeheartedly satisfied in reading. I don't know if you will continue it, cause honestly that was a sound ending, but this story is literally the top 5 on the entire site, hands down. |
| iEliteRoyale chapter 6 . 7/26/2019 (Sorry, I’m rewriting this review because I wrote it in the wrong chapter) Wow... seeing them relate on their fair share of horrors is heartwarming... |
| iEliteRoyale chapter 1 . 7/26/2019 Wow... Seeing them relate on the fact that they’ve both seen their fair share of horrors is heartwarming... |
| T-tawny chapter 29 . 7/24/2019 I love family dynamics |
