Reviews for Mending the Broken Doll
uffauffauffa chapter 4 . 9/26/2017
Despite being away from La Push, the wolf boys and the vampires, LEAH must become a wolf, and this re-activates the mental connection with the other wolf boys who are angry and worried about the disappearance of LEAH. Seth tries to tell LEAH that none of them wanted to hurt her and that they joked. But this does not reassure her about their affection. She has lost him long before he has his first transformation. She see a monster and feel guilty about the people she loves.
uffauffauffa chapter 3 . 9/26/2017
Do you know what the worst thing is? What LEAH thinks they are all the happier now, even her family, because she is no longer. This is horrible. In France, however, LEAH has found a friend and a job that seems to please them, but there is a veil of homesickness, a fog that prevents she from enjoying rejoice completely.
uffauffauffa chapter 2 . 9/26/2017
LEAH tries to break away from herself. First with the studio and maybe in the future with everything else. It will take time to heal from wounds that never completely heal. Something remains. LEAH deserves much more than a happy end bitter.
uffauffauffa chapter 1 . 9/26/2017
Poor LEAH. It is not easy for her to see Sam, Emily and all the guys who now have their "partner for life." LEAH feels silenced and tired of feeling it is not considered like all the other girls. He wants to go away and he does not care if the elders consider him a traitor and a coward. They do not see and do not want to see the pain of LEAH. Too closed in their traditions and legends. But I would like to see Billy Black if instead of LEAH there was one of her daughters. She would have treated her differently and protected in some way. LEAH is alone and alone tackles everything as the immense happiness of all the others.
Bleu chapter 4 . 4/3/2012
I just love this story. I hope that you update it soon. I love reading Leah fics like this one, but most *if not all* don't get finished. So as I have written before, I hope you update it and therefore will be closer to finishing it.
IBTeri chapter 4 . 2/21/2012
would love to read more hope you still plan to finish
Colored Sabotage chapter 4 . 6/22/2010
Hey good job! I'm REALLY looking forward to you updating! Great job on the story, and I hope you continue soon!
H0llaSDC chapter 4 . 5/31/2010
I love this story so far!

Pllease uppdate soon(:
uniqu3s0u7 chapter 4 . 5/31/2010
I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Leah is happier in Paris. so is the OC, angele's bro? I wanna know more of Jake and the tribe's thoughts..
ShadowCub chapter 4 . 5/30/2010
I like it but Leah needs to see a therapist.

So she can get her life back on track and stop

worrying about Seth, Jacob, Sam, the rat running

across the streets at home.

Love the Leah fics but crying and whining about not

being able to have kids how do they know, wolves go

into heat at certain times of the year don't they?

The pack just throws any half assed idea out and she takes

it as the gods honest truth.

Love to see more, she left she's not part of the pack anymore

so the Alpha voice should not work on her anyway.

Why should they want her back, they want her back so that she

can shut up and listen to them and she's a dummy if she goes back.

She's not a slave, wolves come and go in the wild, that's why

they say lone wolf, she's not required to go back.

Whining over those two, there's no guarantee that she and Sam, would have even been dating a year later if they had stayed together.
Kimmydonn chapter 4 . 5/30/2010
So, I got this notice in my email... Hehe. I'd forgotten about this story. I'm so glad to get the update. I can't wait for more. I love Leah 'needing' to phase. I love her dropping out so she doesn't get the Alpha command. It sucks that she's all alone, but also makes perfect sense. Please keep it coming.
o0FLAM3S0o chapter 4 . 5/30/2010
Great chapter

update soon
FalselyTrue chapter 3 . 4/7/2010
It's good, and I'd give you concrit, though my concrit usually ends up hurting a story rather than saving it.

I'm not into the whole Twilight thing and usually the Leah fics (which are totally the only ones I'll read...guilty pleasure...) aren't that good, and good ones are seriously hard to come by. Keep up the good work; you're establishing a great fic. I look forward to your update!
o0FLAM3S0o chapter 3 . 3/12/2010
Love it

update soon
Brinkyfly45 chapter 2 . 3/1/2010
Nice chapter I wonder what was Leah smelling? Update soon
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