Beautiful!i loved it...

I like that story. It's just like Edward to find an interesting place no one else would go for a first date. But just the right place for Bella.

Nice first date.

WOW I really loved and enjoyed that. you should write more one shots of the summer.

lucky Bella!

I just love Edward and Bella fluff! I wish Stephenie Meyer would make another book in the Twilight saga just about the time between Twilight and New Moon.

I want fluff, dagnabit!

Thank you for a lovely glimpse into the summer between Twilight and NM. I find myself the most curious about this span of time between the books- maybe because it's the longest gap in the saga, or maybe because I imagine it full of all the amazing new love feelings that come with the early days of a relationship. And finally, this is the calm before the shocker of Edward's departure.

I love the beautiful sensuality you have woven into the ways that B and E touch each other in this story. And her speech about his arms being the best is really touching.

I loved this! And after reading it, I went to the SAM website to see what collections they have showing (I live about 45 minutes south of Seattle). And ironically, they'll be having an exhibit of Quileute art surrounding the legends of the Quileute wolves, specifically mentioning how the real legends differ from how they're represented in Twilight. I definitely think I'll be going to see that! And here's the link to the exhibit info page if you're interested-

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and if the link doesn't work, go to the website and look under the upcoming gallery exhibits.

This was a great read. I enjoyed your take on how Bella tries to make Edward see himself the way she sees him. Usually in fics they have Edward trying to show Bella how beautiful she is to him but I liked your version of the premise. The background of the museum exhibits was interesting and led to good conversations between them. Thank you for writing. :D

I liked this a lot. It's very in character for them during the summer after Twilight. Something small you did that I really enjoyed was how you characterized Bella and Alice's relationship. Alice was still pushy, but Bella didn't seem to hate her for that. In a lot of fics I wonder why they're best friends because the way the author writes Bella's inner monologue. So overall I really enjoyed this; we need more canon fluff in the fandom.

Loved it!

that was simply amazing hun! I knew it was going to be really good just from reading the summary. I love fluff like this. The Alice parts were cute and funny and the Edward and Bella parts were sweet and natural and very in-character. great job! plus the ending was brilliant, very nice touch :]

I love, love, love a good first Summer together story and there just aren't enough good ones out there. Believe, I've looked.

Wonderful job. Totally canon and I love what Bella says to Edward in the elevator.

Great job. Looking forward to more.

AW! That was a great fic! Great work!

loved it!