| Reviews for Orphead |
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   Shijaeger chapter 1 . 12/16/2017 I'm crying...this was ...amazing...omg (ugly sobbing) |
| Selena92 chapter 1 . 11/28/2017 Wow. Awesome. Love them both in this. Poor Roy...thank the stars he's got Riza. Poor Riza, too, still suffering from her own injury and no doubt worrying about Roy. Love her affirmation that she'll not leave him. |
| sub.C chapter 1 . 5/12/2013 Not leaving. :) So cool. :) |
| edwardfiend chapter 1 . 5/21/2012 Love it |
| Starship Artisan chapter 1 . 10/21/2011 I really liked that, nice work my fellow Canadian! |
| xXSilent MelodyXx chapter 1 . 10/19/2011 This was by far one of the greatest FMA fan fictions I have ever read. Aside from the rating, the story is flawless. You captured the emotions perfectly. The despair and loneliness that Roy feels coupled with the confidence and unwavering loyalty Riza feels is clearly displayed and shows the readers an in depth look between the two. "Your power…never in hands," Riza whispered. "Vision…never in eyes." She slid her own hands down his cheeks and pressed them against his chest. "Here. Always here. Roy." Beneath her fingers, she could feel his heart labouring. Battered, yes, perhaps even broken, but not stopping. Not yet." This line gave me chills. It is one of the most perfect lines in a Royai fic. That was my highlight of the fan fiction when I realized what talent you had for writing. I truly love this and I hope you continue to write amazing stories. Great work. -Silence |
| KiraKillerxxx chapter 1 . 7/20/2011 Cute :) I really like how in character you were! |
| dandoune chapter 1 . 1/23/2011 I'm amazed... That was great :D |
| sophiekeseki chapter 1 . 7/2/2010 Whoa, that was a really awesome fic!~ Great characterization and word choice for them :3 |
| chemiskorpion0002 chapter 1 . 6/29/2010 Great! I just love how you pulled off the emotions in this fic. It's simple and very effective. I absolutely love it! |
| Akabane Girl chapter 1 . 6/10/2010 Really amazing. I like the atmosphere and how you describe their relation as touching but firm. Well done ! |
| steph2009 chapter 1 . 5/13/2010 I loved it. You kept the characters real. No OOC, it probably still would have been awesome though. lol. Really good. |
| Gunterafy chapter 1 . 3/7/2010 Aaw, this story made me all sentimental, mon. :') Great job in conveying Roy's doubts and Riza's belief about his capability of being a leader. :D |
| Kimono Kay chapter 1 . 2/11/2010 Very nice story, captures the moment well and gives hope for the future - which is something I always love about your fics. Another job well done! |
| Kuroida chapter 1 . 2/10/2010 Very nicely written! |
