That bombshell of a line from Ash hahaha. I'm torn between this ending and a possible ending with Misty's reaction.

Team Rocket was hilarious in this one.

Lord knows whether or not you'll actually read this, but I figured the review segment of a fanfic is a subtle enough place to say that I'm working on something, and part of it is because of how much I adore this fanfic. It's one of the few I come back and re-read from time to time. :P The depth of growth you've put Ash through is insane, and it's probably the thing I like most about this fic.

So yeah, awesome fic, hopefully I finish this piece soon enough so I can post more Pokeshipping, but who knows how it'll fare in a sea of the newer ships, I'm guessing. XD

-Syk

Loved the part where ash refused to use the book against any other girl but misty. Sweetness overloaded.

Oh, that surprised me!
I didn't think we'd have a timeskip.
I thought Misty would find out about the book and basically kill Ash.
And I also thought Dawn was going to confess lol
I'm glad that wasn't the case, that'd be awkward.
Oh, and I missed Misty during this chapter :(

Ash is so dead when Misty finds out LOL
I can't believe a book written by Brock could figure her out, out of all people.
It's really funny, although I felt a little bad about Ash's real thoughts when Misty challenged him u_u

Perfect ending, I loved it so much.

That surprised me!
I wasn’t expecting a timeskip, and I thought Misty was basically going to kill Ash when she found out about the book.
I also thought Dawn was going to confess. I'm glad she didn't, that'd be awkward.
I can't believe Ash was so lonely he spent time with Team Rocket lol
Oh, and I missed Misty in this chapter :(

Oh we should of kissed：（

Awe that's so sweet...
You know watching Serena in anime always make me feel bad... I really wish Misty will make a reunion...
I always cry after watching "Gotta catch ya later"
I don't know why I am telling you this maybe becoz you are my favorite writer...:):)

I LOVE IT

oh my gosh so cute

This is a very cute story. I liked how you showed the passage of time but everything still led back to the book. At first when I got to the end, I was like, "Is it over?!" but then I realized it was the perfect ending. I really enjoyed it!

Cool fic I liked it a lot

this was really in character and well written! i hope you continue it. :-)

Great story! I like how you used all the anime arcs in it - or all the arcs there were when this story was writtng - and how Ash grew during this whole story, that's really well done. And I love how it's Brock's book that all this haha. Or well, started all this, though maybe it would've happened anyway. Anyway, great story, funny, but still deep. I love it!
Thank you very much for writing, I really liked it, and keep writing! ! !