if there's more I'd love to read it. please continue

More!

Great story! I enjoyed it!

everything had been perfect.

hey guys, thanks for sharing this lovely chapter of one of my favourite movies. This was so funny and i just couldnt stop laughing. It was so funny i almost fell off my chair! . Well im not the person who reads anything. i actually usually only read magizines but this is good. Great Job! :D :D

Woooow, this was good (and that's my favourite moment in the movies)... I'm so glad your mother bought you the dvd, I'd love you to write some more on this pair... Pretty please?

i really liked this! It was really well-written and was really well-characterized

Wonderful ) Fantastic. I loved the passage with "Who's Gatsby ?"... that's so... imaged (Is that english ?).

So Wonderful, really ) I loved it. (As McDonald *out*)

Thanks for writing )

A french reader

B-B-B-Bennie and the Jets! Bennie! lol, I just got done watching that movie a few minutes ago. Had to look for some fic. Great take on the story!

Jane has always struck me as a doormat,but I love how you made her just enough of a doormat and just enough of a bad-ass.I despise her sister though.

This was actually a clever fix for the movie. The characters are honest to their roles, and this "cut scene" doesn't draw itself out unnecessarily. Good job!

These are so great! I can see these being missing scenes. You've got them down! D

All of this is so in character! I love it! You've got Jane and Kevin down! I love these inbetween the scene fics! Jane would SO be the type of person to have an ulcer, lol. Great work!

more! please!

Interesting. You've really got their personalities down!