This is fantastic, I hope you finish it one day!

In character usually, although Bones is not quite like in the movies.

A little too much language, wouldn't complain at all if you cut some or all of it out.

Please continue this fiction!

Please update soon! I'm really enjoying these.

three more chapters to go :)

ONLY THREE MORE CHAPTERS FOR YOU TO WRITE. PLEASE WRITE THEM. THESE FIRST THREE WERE SO GOOD.

PLEASE!

Definitely revelatory. A real pity it's unfinished.

will be completed? or is this story abandoned?

I need Winona sitting by Jim's bedside as he woke up(from his revival from death in Into Darkness), her eyes swollen and red, face with tear tracks fresh and old and hugging Jim, unwilling to let him go again - mumbling apologies and promises as Jim sleepily acknowledges. I just really needed that scene of her clutching her youngest son tightly and finally seeing him for who he is and promising fiercely to hold on tightly from now on. :3

Of course Winona receiving the notice of his death would have been awesome too. If only you could write thattttttt:O

i want to read the last two chapters... they will come? if not; just discontinue the story or at least in the description... readers want to know more

three more to go... i hope those are coming... :)

Please continue the story I want to read more! Your a great writer and I'm enjoying you're stories so please do continue with this story!

Awesome story. Poor Jim...

two plus one to go

Bastard aliens. Bastard Frank. Bastard world

waiting for the other times to come on this story