Dumb yet hilarious you should make it a diary of draco... every bad day or something... could be cool

im in hysterix now...

ur write that was a little werid but also kinda funny.

Hey! This was...funny, lol. Well yes, I know that many Elves die, but...well I haven't read The Silmarillion yet and that's where most of them do, yes?

You have no LotR stories up! Hmm...you should write some if you know that much! Thanks for reviewing!

*Valerie*

Well I sincerely hoped this cleared your writer's block, because you are capable of writing so much better than this. No chracterisation to speak of, no proper plot, no explanation...need I continue?

I don't intend to flame you, but please, you can do better than this!

okaaaaaayyyy... thats ... okayyyyyyy... ish. um, it's kind of uh... okayyyy... it's like kinda really childish but thats ok ya know if youre like... 12 or younger... ok. its a good idea i guess though. well bye

haha...harry potters head?

Well, at least it was better than your 'Snape and the funny guy' thing. There are more details in it, and it's a little bit longer. But the humor still is a little bit low-level. Do you know bad written stories like this are making my English only worse? If my grades for it will drop, I'll make you pay! *coughs* Okay, just keep on trying.

good night to you to, OKIE WAAAAAAA it endeds , waa me so sad, wait no i am not i have chocolate , WEEEEEEEEEE

Yeah that was a bit wierd but kinda funny

Uh...what happened?

EXCELLENT

extremely funny and creative

That was suposed to be funny? I didn't even mentally grin. And what does the title have to do with anything? No one died! And in your bio you say you hate HP. Then what are you doing making fics about the charactors?

weird... and stupid corny funny

Huh?