Reviews for Family
Probably Not Captain America chapter 51 . 12/15/2018
I know it’s been 8, nearly 9 years since you wrote this. Are you ever going to come back to it with the third book?
Rsl chapter 1 . 9/5/2017
I LOVE THIS STORY! Thank you for inspiring me as a writer! Hope you are doing well :)
swanqueen2122 chapter 51 . 12/16/2016
please, please, please finish this story or at least continue it a little bit, I absolutely love this story sooo much!
claireeleven chapter 51 . 11/3/2015
This was literally the first fanfic I ever read. My friend was reading it at the time and we both liked House, so she recommended it to me. That was about 6-7years ago. I recently rewatched House on Netflix and it made me think of this story so I looked it up and found there was now a sequel and I was beyond excited. Except now I've finished the sequel and there is no 3rd part. I know you haven't updated this story in over 5 years but this whole plot is so intriguing and well thought out and you are an amazing writer so if you ever wanted to continue writing this, just letting you know that I would be so freaking happy and would love you forever.
Kensi1997 chapter 50 . 3/5/2015
Did you ever do the 3rd part. I really love this story. I found it and haven't been able to stop readying until I got to the end. :( Please update again. I would willing to help you write the story too if you like because obviously your busy and Im busy at times too and we can help each other. I've always wanted to write but maybe it would be best to help someone out first.
HighKicker chapter 1 . 2/13/2015
I would love to see this story continued. It's been years and I still come back to it and read it in its entirety. It's wonderful, and the foul-spirited reviewers are horrible bullies, I'm sorry you had to deal with them.
Bethany Owens chapter 51 . 9/20/2012
Are you gonna update this story? Maybe put up a new chapter? I miss reading it :)
GoneAF chapter 51 . 1/16/2012
WOW.

So it's about 220 AM and i just spent the better part of the last few hours reading this story and WOW. I gotta admit at first I was definitely put off by what appeared to be happening to the trio of ducklings. But now enough that my curiosity was ever let go and I continued reading. Eventually I went from being outright disturbed to oddly fascinated. You did quite the job with handling the material you set forth for all the characters here. The evolution (or I guess DE-volution in some cases) of everyone and their plight was incredibly done. This story is honestly like nothing I've ever read before and the twisted part of me (the one that made me keep reading) says a giant kudos for your daring. I never would have come up with anything like this, and if I did, I have no idea if I'd have been brave enough to post it here.

It was disturbing without being outright vulgar. Very well crafted and I'd love to see Book Three continued.

Of course, I say this knowing that the last time it was updated was back in 2010, but here's hoping that maybe getting a review after so long might spark some sort of insipiration for you...if not, possibly even just a summary of what you had planned for it? Simpy put, I hate to see any story left unfinished, and this one especially deserves a follow through and a resolution in whatever capacity you have/had planned as the author.

Wow, that was a long review. It's late and I need to sleep now.

I'd love to hear back from you,

Torch
Protect My Lonely Heart chapter 51 . 10/24/2011
Hi! I know it's been such a long time, but I really hope you continue this story! You are an amazing writer; don't pay any attention to the stupid reviewers who say otherwise. While horrifying, this fic was one of my favs and one of the best I have ever read. I'm going crazy now, though! I just spent the last 7 hours reading this story. No joke, SEVEN HOURS xD I just have to know what's up with Cameron! What happened that made her snap out of being Allie? What was so important that she needed to tell them when she first came back? Ugh, so many questions! Anyway, I desperately hope that you find he inspiration to continue his story because there are so many of us out here that love it :D
ash chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
can we talk? i'm on aim wndrlndbby1123 still
flight815surviver chapter 51 . 9/3/2011
omg i so hope you havent abandoned the story i deperatly wanna no who the man is
flight815surviver chapter 36 . 8/26/2011
probably a leap but miricles happen. woman who dont know their preggers till baby falls out surely not noticing contractions just as wierd. :D
YouKnowWho chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
YOU STUPID B!TCH I HOPE YOU ROT IN HELL FOR WHAT YOU DID TO ME!
AlexisSophia chapter 48 . 2/25/2011
I hope you haven't abandoned this story! I just reread it cause I like it soooo much. If possible, let me know if you're planning to continue
JLCH chapter 50 . 2/23/2011
Ok I've read a lot of great fanfic but this is the worst I've ever read. I can't even believe people liked this. I can't continue it, I'm sorry!
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