| Reviews for Stolen Breaths |
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Pink Bead Girl chapter 1 . 6/23/2011 I am not familiar with Kingdom Hearts but I think it matters not, for what you have laid out here in such abundant melancholy beauty speaks to the reader no matter where it comes from or whom it portrays. I love the sad, the broken, the exquisite lancing of the blade of unrequited love and you dear Pink Cherry, have fulfilled all my wants with this tear-clouded offering. "...helpless, defeated, and tied up in loneliness more fragile and sheer than my glassy 'heart', which had been easily broken..." Another of those descriptions that you do so utterly,sublimely well. I see her there, her aura clouded by the crystalline brittleness that was the delicate, jewel bright thing that used to be her heart before it shattered to a million diamond shards. That is the picture that comes to me through your soft, deft words. I love the bright clear edges of that wounded heart, the pathos of the unreachable. I do so love your work very much. I feel you do not reap the recognition that such loveliness deserves but I for one am much moved by it. Thank you. May your muse ever grace you. |
kairitheseventhprincessofheart chapter 1 . 7/20/2010 That was breathtaking and heartbreaking and beautiful. Sormine is love 3 I loved how you wrote her emotions and I absolutely adored it all, especially the end. |
NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 2/8/2010 Aw~! |