i love it i hope you write a sequal to this xx

Please write more Luke & Ruby stories. That was outstanding and I think if the show had not been cancelled eventually they would have gotten together. They had such great chemistry.

There was so much potential. Oh the stupid powers to be.

Nice story, well thought out and good imagery but you need to be more aware of your spelling and in a couple of places you shift into the first person. Generally though, I liked it.