I can see a flaw in her logic.

If James, Peter, Remus and Sirius stop being friends with Lily just because she loves Severus, then they're not true friends, and to hell with them!

I really like how you write, your style of writing is refreshing, but this story made me like Lily a lot less, even though I know it's not canon. It angers me, what she said about them not being able to be together because of their friends. Why should it matter what other people think?

i almost cried! LILY & SEV 4EvA

I cried! It was so sad - but amazing!

AMAZING! I loved it! It made me cry! :(