Oops... yet another 'Merican what don't know even the cops can't buy a handgun in the uk... ok, having said that, I am enjoying the story... it's just that I thought everyone all over the world knew uk cops don't carry... and a hunting rifle? in the uk? to hunt what? in Scotland the most dangerous creature is the midge... bout the size of a pinhead but they hunt in swarms... and they bite, and you get itchy for a few days... and bees n wasps... they can sting and it hurts for a day or two... Jings, Hoots ma bob... Ah wance hud a Gull swoop doon an stole ma chips so it did... I was doon the water at the seaside,,,

Hmm.
Not an issue that being 5 hours different, Harry could have portkeyed back and leveled the troll with the glock...
Not an isdue that begore NY, the Grangerd got a too good cant refuse tpractice to tske over for long list relative from NYC prior to term,...
BUT Didnt you make a point of having Tonks tell Harry to take out Quirrel and getting the Stone begore NY?

Odd. He could have gotten Tonks papers.

Also, condideting how Tonks smothered Harry in your stories when he sjowed he was a metamorph.. why no reaction when he bacame little Harry. Weird.

Msth isnt right. 1000gal winnings eq joke shop

Seems
1. Could have done 500g instead of thousand. With your generosity but with half the amounts ut made more sense.
2. With that math, you could dbl money for a clean dozen flys beibg prodiced.

Talk about stretching this out. Sad. Dropping story. (1) he didnt go to Gringotts. No excuse. (2) he spent months on occlumency and no duce. (3) doesnt use normal harry the detective to figure things out . (4) other than ssking out Hermione, he us a hufflepuff. (5) boring retread of 4 books

You have done bettet

Abrupt and unbelievable

Reading

stop trying to remove the Potters memory
it's fucking stupid.

This story should be called Dobby The Great House Elves. He is too smart, smarter than harry and more powerful. haha

this is total trash, why send Harry back if you were gonna erase his memories, you r an idiot!

wow, you are a really, really scary author who turn the original and innocent Harry Potter into a ruthless and lonely one with dark past and heartache who fights back! well, i like about what you create the personalities of original characters into different ones who don't try to be perfect (I F*CKINGLY HATE MARY-SUE and GARY-STU CHARACTERS WITH PASSION!).

I love and hate this story. Hermione is my main issue with it. in the beginning Harry can't understand why he cares for her so much and desperately wants to protect her but the first time something happens to separate them he just lets her go. at first I thought he didn't realise that she had been mind f*k*d. but after he confronted Dumbazzshit he definitely knew and just let moRon continue raping her and moved on to tonks. There were so many things he could have tried to free her but he never even made the attempt.

Great story. I hope you pick it back up in the future sometime.

freaking awesome so far, thank you.

Great start hope to see more soon