A very nice oneshot. Thanks for writing.

This is a beautiful fic :) Love it!

I'm normally not a Vita fan but this made me cheer for her.

You write without the cliche you find in other authors. This makes your fics look less fantasy like and harder than the rest. It is good for this type of fic but I suppose that it would be hard to write a romance like this, at least a happy one.

Keep on going!

I liked it very much.

Wonderful! Completely wonderful! .

true that there isnt enough vita stories and this was a really good and written story, hope more vita stories would be produced. Thxs for the hard in writting these well written stories most appreciated.

Damn fine writing!

The flow is excellent, the characters are actually in character (which no mean feat) the formatting is great, the spelling is flawless... am I gushing? Yes. But this story is worth it.

There isn't enough Vita on this site; this is tragic, because she's a character basically made of pure awesome. Beyond that there really isn't enough good writing on this site, but this story was worth trolling through the other stuff for. Thanks, and bloody well done.

AMAZING, thats all i can say