| Reviews for The Mass Effect |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 3/14/2016 You don't accept flaming? Well what would you do if someone reviewed and if they had some good points and opinions for your story? If you really think that way I'll say this once I do see some problems here in your story but I will not give them out such as that will be what you may consider flaming. I'll just avoid this profile like others and find something that actually has potential. That will be my review and lastly no one likes a writer who is inconsiderate towards their readers. All readers as long as their opinions do make some sense to consider like grammar, story ideas, and suggestions to consider from readers. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2015 Outstanding chapter |
 reallyfreakingnerdy chapter 1 . 3/11/2015 Interesting idea that I can honestly say I've never seen before. Although it kind of lost it on the last third. That and grammar wise it could use a bit of work. |
| Dage chapter 1 . 12/14/2014 This is really good and it's nice and long |
| Imortal Carnage chapter 1 . 8/18/2013 Duuuuuuude! I am so sad that this has not been update since it was published! cause it is amazing with one chapter! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2013 stupid |
| Kingdark chapter 1 . 4/8/2012 Even though it's been well over a year and a half I feel I should review anyway. First of all, all your 'I's are written as 'i's That is a mistake. Secondly, all the words such as you're and the like. You also confuse their/there and words that sound alike such as now and know. These are all rookie mistakes. All of that could be ignored if only the story wasn't so emotionless. The speed of the story is good, but I tend to experience my fiction 'up close' which means that I tend to imagine it as best as possible. When I read this, it is all without emotion. It's like someone is telling me this but isn't changing his tone at all. The spelling and grammar mistakes don't help at all to fix this. Swedish or not, any spelling check would have alerted you at many of these mistakes. All by all a good attempt but I would still give it a 5/10 in general. Kingdark |
| Mrcrazyman94 chapter 1 . 3/20/2012 I like it very well made I hope you will continue the story for it was very amazing to read. |
| ultima-owner chapter 1 . 3/11/2012 This is good |
| wolfey141 chapter 1 . 3/3/2012 will this be a tali/naruto pairing? |
| AresLaw chapter 1 . 8/27/2011 very well written, i hope you continue this someday |
| Acrimony102934 chapter 1 . 8/5/2011 Very well written, please update! |
| ryuou chapter 1 . 7/27/2011 I like the fic, plese continue when you can |
| Phibriglex chapter 1 . 3/2/2011 this is an amazing story, very intense. why stop tho? |
