This was fucking sweet in the romantic way and sweet in the kick-ass action way. I definitely didn't know what to think of this pairing but now I have to say it is real and I love it, you did a fantastic job. The tone was amazing in this as well, especially the ending. With the final big fight I had no idea who would live or die, and that is an incredible gift to catch an audience by the hope like that. The epilogue really sold me on everything too, it was so perfect and I left the story smiling. Thank you so much for writing this, I loved every minute of it!

Really love the fact that this series focuses on two characters and not Shepard. I also really love how you characterized the two, because they felt very natural.

This is going on my list as one my favorite ME fanfics *ever*. I'd never considered a Jack/Thane pairing...but yours is awesome, and is now headcanon for me! Jack's encounter with the hostile elevator and her subsequent, erm, 'talk' with Mordin had me laughing so hard I was crying. I am very much looking forward to reading the next one!

For the love of Madara Uchiha! Write the sequel!

This was very good.

Ah! Definitely going to enjoy this one!

I think that I'm going to enjoy this one!

This was amazing. You somehow successfully put two of the most polar opposites of individuals together and made it work so well. Really enjoyed reading this, thank you!

Hey! I'm not sure if you still read reviews, but i wanted you to know that i absolutely loved this piece! you managed to balance the right amount of humor, action, romance and dialogue perfectly all the while keeping in touch with the story line as well as the characters. Each and very one of them was exactly as they should be.( in my opinion) and i really liked how you used some of the thanes and Jocob's dialogue, it really worked for the story. ( and honestly, i wish they had Zaeed and the flanethrower part in the game! This piece was/is sheer epicness. I tip my hat to you! And look forward to reading more of your work.

Very nice. First time I've ever seen this pairing before, but you really made it work well. Loved the scene in Jack's cell on Pragia. Jack pinning Thane against a wall, whew. *Fans self* And the end of that chapter was perfect, you gave me exactly what I was hoping for there: snap. Thanks for the great read!

"How'd you hit the son of a bitch?" she asked, blinking. "I can't see more than ten feet in here."

"Neither can I," the drell answered, changing the heatsink on his gun. "I memorized where he was standing and adjusted for a heart shot."

Instant badass.

Ok while I love Jack, Jack and Thane together is not something I'd ever think I'd like. I came for the Thane...but I stayed for Jack. You managed to take two completely diffrent people and put together and make it work. And not just work, but make it 100% believable.

This is one of the best ME fan fics I have ever read. It was funny, romantic, action packed, nerve wracking and even a lil angsty. Beautifully written pretty much fucking perfect.

I loved it. 10 out of 10 awesomeness!

Was recced here from Intersititium by AssaultSloth. I love Jack, as a Femshep, I wish there was more Jack dialogue to enjoy! She's tough, she's vulnerable, she wants to run away and become a pirate...awesome. And to match her with Thane, cool, calm, badass Thane and make it work! Well I bow to you. Thanks for the great trip, and congrats on your MA!
-PistachioInfernal

I thought this was a great story. A very odd pairing, but thats part of the fun P

You seem to have closed down most points of contact, so I'm leaving you a message here to let you know I did an audiofic of this fic. You can find it at sanguineaudiofics on Tumblr. Thanks! If there are any issues with this, or you would prefer I pull it down, just say the word.

This was hilarious and heartwarming, and your storytelling and word choice is exquisite. I enjoyed every chapter . Great job!