Maybe it should come as a surprise like how Will got his powers

Dude no seriously update my god nooooo. I c y lash did it now, please wake her up

So far this is one of my many favs there is a lot bit thos one is one of the best my fav thing so far is when the awesome gram says "quite frankly my dear I don't give a damn" it the line that is my fav from gone with the wind ofcourse I always had a thing for the loner blacksheep of the family and gram is just that lol

cool story

AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHH THAT WAS EPICCCCCCCCC WOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOO!

HOLY. CRAP. I'm so excited I haven't even finished chapter 15, I just skipped straight to the review button. I think I live you more now xD I thought it couldn't get any better, first the Max/OC story, then the Benny/OC, but as soon as I read the words CHRISTOPHER MINTZ-PLASSE I knew you were AWESOME!

Seriously, I love Benny (he is one of my current obsessions, so I hope you come out with your sequel soon!) but I love Red Mist just as much! (he's my other current obsession!)
So yeah, I'm gonna go back and finish reading this chapter, then probably the rest of the story and the sequel, so... Just wanted to say...

YOU ROCK!

O...M...G! I sure didn't expect that ending. I still can't believe she fell into a coma. I can't believe it! O O O

My name's Heather...

Cliff hanger! I'm glad I found this after you've written the sequel! Sequel here I come!

that slutty whore of a bitch! omg I was shouting that and yeah you beat her asss up when amazon and amelia were beating heather up! lol nice and funny chapter

i loved it.

I HAVE 2 WAIT 2 SEE WHAT HAPPENS! I can't do that! It's impossible!

OMG AMAZING!

OOC? I'm pretty sure I'm OCD. That was an interesting chapter:)

I would've made myself cry from laughing so hard if I wrote this:) I loved it!