I really enjoyed it! Thanks a lot for writing this piece.

Cheers!

This was fantastically sweet, but heart-breaking as well. I loved the giant made of paper line, it was beautiful and it made their relationship for me. I also loved how you focus it on Remus, having him waching her asleep, evaluating her, it works reaally well. It depressed me first about his thoughts on his condition, but also on how we all know this ends for them (I live in a fantasy world where nothing like that ever happens to them). Beautiful and a very good read.

"He wanted more that just that skin's brush, but he couldn't" -'more than' ? typo? XP

oh and also, in this story you wrote 'she crumpled him' and 'she crumbled him'. I dunno whether it is in purpose or not though..

anyways, I never heard the song, but this was really sweet. I've always enjoyed Remus/Tonks. :) They are prove that love knows no boundaries...

Normally I'm Remus/Luna all the way, but that was a lovely oneshot. You captured Remus' reserves as well as his affection for Tonks perfectly. Making her vulnerable in sleep was a nice touch.

Amazing! I should have read those stories earlier. I really like the way you portray those two and how you show their feelings. The way they gor cute;)

I LOVE this! This was really wonderful, and very in character. Excellent job!

This was an amazing story. I loved it so much, it showed Remus's character so well and I loved it!

OMG this was so sweet! I absolutely loved it! It was so beautifully written! I loved how you wrote Remus' vulnurability! Loved it so much! You are amazing!

~Allie 3

Awe that was really sweet

Wow, this is fantastic! I really loved some of the description: "And for once, the moon was not his enemy"... "Afraid that a simple touch on the pale skin of her shoulder would make him weak, would make him change his answer"... It's just really quite vivid and strangely peaceful. Very sweet fic, I'm glad I finally got around to reading it.

It was pretty good.

I like the concept - "A giant made out of paper, and she crumbled him" - is a great metaphor, and the idea is adorable. However, your writing seems a bit forced and harsh, like it does not flow smoothly. You don't have any major grammar/punctuation/spelling errors that I could have detected through my quick reading-through, and overall, it was pretty good.

I would give it 3.5/5 lightning bolts.

Aw so...sweet and yet a little sad. I loved it.

Aww Tat. I liked it. Are you going to continue it?

:)