An absolutely fantastic story from begging to end. Your imagination for your characters and plot made this fic beyond entertaining. I adore this Bella and Edward. Nine years on and lucky readers like myself can still get swept up in the romance and adventure of The Family Business. I pray life finds you happy and well.
Truly you wrote a great story.

this was a great story

love your approach to this story. have not read one with quite this story line

If the cullens are vampires how can they eat?

Thank you for writing this sweet story! You really pulled it off by having Bella be a vampire and not emasculating Edward. It was very well written and I enjoyed it very much!

Great story! Beautifully written! Loved it! Thank you!

This was such a fun twist! Thanks for the wonderful adventure. :)

Loved it. Great take on the story and well written. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

What a fun fic. Loved it from beginning to end.

I know i'm extremely late, ice-age-scale late tot he party, but this was one of the most exciting and enthralling romantic scenes I've read. I'm grinning as much as they are! :D

I loved this story. Thank you!

AWESOME! little story ;D nicely wrapped up :) It was a shame that they didn't have their extra powers but I suppose it wasn't needed for this story ;) thanks for completing and posting it for us ;D

This story is BAD-FRERAKIN'-ASS. YOU rOcK mY sOcKs, ChIcA! Ash

Loved this story!

I love the man card reference! Definitely made me smile!