Loved it ;) very well written

Oh my goodness, I loved this so much! I loved how it perfectly incorporated exact lines from the game while still maintaining it's originality! I wish this was exactly how it happened in my game.

Wow this was so good !

You wrote both of their reactions to Shepard's death and you wrote them beautifully :)

I've just played that mission again so i really like how you went it. I wonder how you're going to write the afterwards.

I love your writing style- very succint, like Shepard herself :D Also like how you've written of Shepard so that we know, underneath all that armour and that enigmatic gaze, she's feminine too, and thinks about Garrus a lot.

Finally- I love how British she is xD Seems like tea can make even a former Spectre feel good...

dawww such a cute fic I love garrus plz continue

Aww. So cute!

Haha, I loved Garrus's comment about the dress and his blood pressure. Very IC and hilarious. Fantastic work!

Fantastic. Absolutely well done. One of the first and best Garrus/Shepard fics I have ever read. _ I look forward to seeing more from you.

I'm at a loss for speaking with any sort of eloquence right now, after reading this, so I'll just go with my gut:

Holy hot damn, that's some AMAZING writing you've done there!

Intellectually, I never saw the appeal in the Garrus/Shepherd pairing. It just seemed too. . .contrived. Forced. Unnecessarily complicated. Granted, their banter on the matter was sweetly amusing and endearingly awkward. (Save for the night before the Omega 4 relay, anyway.) However, that wasn't enough to make me a fan of that particular romance option. After reading this, though?

I'm sold. You've got a convert on your hands. You should be proud. :)

i pretty much love all of your mass effect stories! this one is no exception! LURVE 3

This was great, loved it all from beginning to end.

Especially the shout out to Joss!

Awesome, loved this. Characters fit well together :)

I really loved this. Particularly the sparring scene. Very well done!