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great story

That child is six weeks? What? And how long have they been in school for?

Haha, Birmingham.

There were so many sappy moments in here. How did you get me to read this? ._.

I think you started to rush at the end. Either that or you only had a certain number of periods (punctuation!) that you could have used in a chapter. Also - when someone is talking, and you skip to a new paragraph, you don't end the paragraph with quotations, but you start the new one with them.

"staying for good and started him pressuring me about other things" You can English good!

Yay! Got to hear about the mystery booii. Didn't take much to convince her to spill though. .

Yes, I'm more of a critic than a fan, but hey. Review? Though, I don't know how this makes you want to start another chapter.. Erm. Good chapter! ;]

It seems like they waited until this year to start piling everything on us. Lovely. Have you done your paper yet, or are you doing it second semester?

Luck writing, and with stuff.

~ibbit

Love the story :)

I just discovered this story. It is so fascinating, romantic and really lovely. I loved how Troy and Gabby relationship is based on friends now even though their is a hint of something more.

Gabby's life is really unpleasant, yet Troy makes it worthwhile with his actions and feelings toward Gabby and Ariela.

1)"It was that she was...drawn to him. Like he held all of the answers that she had been searching for. " THAT SOUNDS SO CREEPY! 2)Maria sounds so nice! I wish she were MY mom. Oh, by the way? I call abuse. Report! 3)"By the tone in her voice Troy could tell that whatever her mom thought about her wasn't very good" WOW! Way to go sherlock.

There are a few grammar mistakes that I will not point out. At all. *twitch* but otherwise, decent. SORRY FOR TAKING SO LONG! You know exactly how it is. Ugh. Only 10 more days though!

Anyways.. . The story line is coming along VERY good. Love the little fight scene with Mummy and Gabriella, the history of it. Long chapter - cheers :)

Now let us see how the 6th chapter works out, eh? And give these things names, (enter colorful word) . Chapter 5? Story 2? Sheesh! -.-

Haha, luck writing freak.

~ibbit

Love this story. Cant wait far the next chapter! :)

aw i'm glad she wen to troy... troy's parents should let them stay with them for a while... update soon. i love this

Love it!

This is really good... I am hooked... Cant wait to read more...

JENNIFER

Isn't Gabriella supposed to be a math wiz? Aka love it? "She had never been so happy to feel pain before in her life." Emo child.. And so violent! Wishing Sharpay off the cliff. Sheesh. (I SEE A TYPO!) What? Ten minute speech on respect.. sounds like a certain language teacher we might or might not have this year. Why is Gabi so antisocial? I mean ONE friend wouldn't kill her! Gahh.

Random suggestion? Put lines or something to signify time laps such as end or period or whatever. -.-.- ~.~ or just anything.

LETTING HIM IN? She accepted frikkin cookies! That's not letting ANYONE in. Shes worse than me! Gah!

Anyways. Okay so I reviewed your story. I'm probably not the first.. but I did it anyways! :) Be greatful!

Okay so random note here! When we go to Gwentith Ann's house.. err.. next saturday?.. but yeah when we go to her house.. THEN you get your bread. A'ight?

LONG REVIEW OVER! GET BACK TO YOUR LIFE.

Luck writing. You'll need it :)

~ibbited

aw i really want them to get close, troy should see her daugther and take care of her with gabi... update soon. their families should have dinner together D update soon

"Like epic fail horrible." (hah)

"Taylor asked scaring the mess out of Catalina" (Amusing. The word mess is being used in the worst spots. Yaey! :D )

Chad is stupid. SO very stupid. :D Its amusing. Taylor seems kinda stupid too, or maybe just persistant. But I guess we'll find out yeah? Catalina is a smarty also. Yuep.

Okay. I finished reviewing. You no longer need to hold your breath and wait. Cause I KNOW that you wait for me to review your story.. right? .

Luck writing

~ibbited

Love it! Update soon!

aw who is ariela's father ? i want gabi to need troy to have projects together and really get to know each other... troy is also quiet i guess. I love this update soon. i hope there are flashbacks soon showing what happened in the pass.