Crocodile may not be a dessert but he sure as he'll is a desert ;')

Estuvo buenisimo y el hard esta muy ricolino

thank you

"saignement de nez"

Love give me more

Lovr your Story ;-)

i love the story can u make more of luffy x shanks

Hehe great pairing and you wrote it really well too. Loved it! Thank you!

how could you not have sabo?! but this was great anyway loved it

perfect

God, I need a fan, three cold glasses of water and some ice cubes because this was beyond HOT! It left me parched, and wanting more Doflamingo and Luffy scenarios. From Luffy outright punching him in the beginning to his screaming his name out toward the end and Doflamingo taking it upon himself to make sure his dream comes true of sleeping with Luffy (insert fire emojis here)! I was yelling after reading this chapter and then I went on to read the other chapters and they all left me thirsty. You’re an amazing writer and I can’t thank you enough for writing this. It was absolutely beautiful.

I NEED ANOTHER PART TO THIS BUT ONE WHERE LUFFY IS FINGERING HIMSELF AND LUCCI WATCHES BECAUSE THAT PART WHERE LUCCI HANDED HIM THE LUBE... I SERIOUSLY THOUGHT HE WAS GOING TO ASK LUFFY TO FINGER HIMSELF OPEN JUST FOR HIM AND IT MADE ME FREAKING YELLLLLL! YOURE A DAMN TERRIFIC AUTHOR AND I HOPE YOU CONTINUE THIS SERIES WHENEVER YOU HAVE TIME. MAYBE YOU CAN ADD ONE WITH MARCO? JUST A SUGGESTION THKUGH AND NOW IM GONNA CONTINUE YELLING OVER THIS ENTIRE SERIES CAUSE WHOO BOY THIS WAS SERIOUSLY HOT AND SO BEAUTIFUL

I fucking love the threesome!

LuffyxBarto?

Love it so good amazing