| Reviews for Bella's First Spanking |
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  amelia chapter 1 . 8/7/2019 YES! |
| Nataeya chapter 1 . 1/22/2018 Sounds like a good story and the spanking part sounds really good and that is a well deserved spanking |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/18/2017 Yes more |
| anomoymous chapter 1 . 12/30/2016 yes you should its so good |
| Isabella B chapter 1 . 8/14/2016 I love it, but you switched POVs and it was a bit jarring. |
 Footsie chapter 1 . 5/9/2016 Yes you should write more!:-) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2016 No, I don't really like how Edward seems like a good guy. If Bella was upset, I might have been fine because Bella acts like she LIKES getting hurt in the books,but the fact that it seems like Edward is good and this is a norm doesn't make me like this very much. Perhaps make it clearer that Edward is a bad person and thinks this is normal but it really isn't? |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/9/2016 Please write more with a lemon and much harder spankings, maybe with a belt! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/25/2016 heck yeagh write more |
| BrynAlyssia chapter 1 . 1/28/2016 Poor Bella. Maybe Jacob will break Edward's jaw. |
| MickieClaire chapter 1 . 12/1/2015 I like it. -) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2015 More |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2015 Yes write more |
| Scarlette chapter 1 . 6/24/2015 I love that we're getting both perspectives, though it's a little confusing. You might want to use different typefaces so that we know who's talking. But I love that the behavior is about her safety, not money. Guys seem to want to make everything about money and it does not evoke that wonderful "being taken care of and loved" place I always want it to come from. You're doing a good job. Keep going! |
| kittyranma chapter 1 . 10/3/2014 Oh yes really you should write more. I really enjoyed this. |
