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feyfaithy chapter 61 . 6/4 I'm ever so glad to discover this story posted here as I was devastated it was gone from AO3. Here's hoping the millstone still grinds and you have some more chapters to add eventually. Nonetheless if it remains unfinished it is still worth the read. |
meladi1 chapter 61 . 6/5/2019 Pffft, by now Sesshomaru is basically a Disney princess with all the animals helping him, lol. I love the character development in this story, it feels so natural. Despite the fact that Sesshomaru is completely ooc to is Canon self, he doesn't feel ooc, because he slowly changed into what we see in the latest chapter. And that is admirable. To change a character so much, but not too much to make him unrecognizable. Also. I really wanna see art with short haired Sesshomaru now xD And I gotta say, it's admirable that you have stuck with the story for so long. It really takes determination to continue after a very long break or block. I hope to see an update someday. It would be sad to see something you have worked so long and hard with go unfinished. Favourite and follow. Adieu. |
meladi1 chapter 59 . 6/5/2019 Oh dear, Baba Yaga is one nasty lady. I wish Sesshomaru luck xD |
meladi1 chapter 38 . 6/4/2019 I don't get it, why did the villagers turn her away? Was it because she captured the Shinigami? Did she tell them? |
meladi1 chapter 35 . 6/4/2019 Huh, this is the first time I don't recognise the fairy tale. Cool. Sesshomaru as Rapunzel tho, nice xD |
Pirate Of The Stars chapter 10 . 1/29/2019 Shesshomaru, don't be an ass... |
Merlenyn chapter 61 . 12/11/2018 I love this story! :D I love all the bits of familiar fairy tales and the non familiar ones, even the ones where I know names and maybe the items but the story itself is a mystery to me. And all the tidbits of information about items and words and things you include at the end of a lot of the chapters are fun too. I've been great watching how Sesshomaru has slowly changed over the apparent months he and then Kagome had been stuck in this realm Benten created just for the sake of teaching Sesshomaru a lesson. And then Kagome had to learn and just as she'd seemingly learned her lesson, or started to really learn it, things shift and now Sesshomaru is the one seeking to rescue her instead! I'm wondering what's going on with Kagome right now, like is she just stuck somewhere waiting for him or is she in a sleep similar to many of the fairy tales that may very well require a kiss (the whole "true love's kiss" kinda thing) to awaken her? Hmm... I'm rather hoping it is a true love's kiss scenario in the end though because I really like Sesshomaru and Kagome together. XD Anywho, I wish you luck on figuring out your notes and the next parts of the story and I hope to see more story soon! :D |
afeltyz chapter 61 . 6/25/2018 Another excellent chapter. I can't believe that I'm still hooked after 61 chapters. I thoroughly look forward to your future chapters. |
Passerbye chapter 61 . 6/24/2018 I could not really put to words my appreciation of your writing. Pardon any clumsy wording. Your blend of canon and fairy tales is exquisite, the elements you take of each is a foundation to an elaborate and well built story. The character growth, especially in regards to Sesshomaru, is gradual and feels natural. Never did I feel like anything was rushed or out of character for the situation. Your descriptions paint a vivid portrait, a complete world that I can see clearly. The attention to detail and respect given to the origional tales is wonderful. I can really see and feel the research you must have done and found immense joy from trying to guess from what tale, or multiple, you were referencing throughout your chapters. In your latest chapters I have been delighted to see all range of characters and from so many backgrounds! Baba Yaga is a small favorite of mine and so it was a perfect surprise. I greatly look forward to reading any future chapters that you might post. Thank you for sharing your tale. |
the Honeycomb chapter 61 . 6/17/2018 Ugh see this is what happens when I don't read multiple chapters at a time, I forget all the little details! I remembered the sparrow but forgot the fruit and the value of those cards. I was actually nervous that Sessho would lose a card game or that Baba would eat the sparrow. This way is much better! |
Estefania chapter 61 . 6/14/2018 Esta muy bien esta historia. El transcurso de los cuentos a sido divertido y loscambios de kagome y seshomaru an sido prometedores. Lo leí de un tirón, como es larga pensé que estaría terminada así que me lleve un chasco cuando no vi final. Este último con ella como un León y seshomaru tan juguetón y jovial , pensé que quizás los dioses le terminarán dando algún regalo a kagome como la inmortalidad un ser celestial o bestial. O quien sabe quizás kagome desde un principio fue una de esas tantas diosas olvidadas o reencarnadas. Seshomaru sienta algo por kagome pero aun no muy fuerte y no esta enterado además. Así que espero que con su búsqueda resuelva sus sentimientos y cuando vuelvan a reunirse sea paga comersela ja ja ja. Suerte y sigue pronto porfabor. |
Roseanna817 chapter 60 . 2/13/2018 I have spent the last week and a half reading your story, and I must say I love the way you portray everything. The alterations to the "classic fairy tales" is so very creative, and Iike how you didn't limit either Sesshomaru or Kagome's participation in the stories to roles that matched their gender. I still get a chuckle out of imagining Sesshomaru in some kind of long gown dress from the 1600's. I hope you update soon, because I look forward to reading more of Sesshomaru's reflections about his own life and how he interacts with other people. Keep up the fantastic writing! :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2018 Okay.. pheww it took me two days but I have read it all! Great story! Loved the details in it all .. the build up .. how each chapter and each arc becomes more and more intricate.. i love how it feels like now that Sesshoumaru is the one looking for Kagome the style of the story has completely changed. And you are using other stories for it. And how he is playing more ‘by the books’ than Kagome did. I don’t know what will happen but I really like how this is solely Sessh’s POV. The comedic style has left a bit now that the roles are reverted but I can’t wait what you come up with.. I regret reading it all so fast and for me to have to wait likee the rest but I have the patience, I think Owww and i can’t point out all the chapters but indeed there are still mistakes in the story mostly spelling and you forget to finish your sentences .. and even the latest chapters you wrote his name correctly.. It’s Jaken and not Janken.. and Rin not Rinn .. otherwise yeahh .. ow and thank you for the explanation of the stories you were inspired by. i don’t remember all the stories my self but it is very lovely to see this alla once upon a time/ anime mash up .. it’s awesome Ok i am done Greetings A93 |
Hati chapter 60 . 2/3/2018 Ohh I love any updates of this story and they never disapoint! Baba Yaga is quite charming as a character and Sesshomaru's maturity always captivates me, little things like how he knows how to avoid verbal baiting and his aunt's interests gives a lot of insight to his many experiences and years as opposed to how he is portrayed as a bitter teenager in many other stories, even in cannon Inuyasha a little. P.S. Wouldn't have minded meeting Dawn, Day and Deepest Night ;) (Forgive my spelling errors, it's not my first language hehe) |
sesshylovr chapter 60 . 2/4/2018 This story deserves SOOOOO many more reviews! Happily awaiting your next chapter! |