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Nice work! Don't worry, I can never finish stories either... But cliffhangers are cool too... Nice detail in there, and I think you got the characters fairly well described - considering it's a story with a twist... Overall, well done...

A Sherlock Holmes Fan...

I loved it.I had to do some research for my essay for school and im gonna use some of this i LOVED it thanks so much

Awww... that was just sweet...

I really liked/how you portrayed mycroft. He is a loving and caring big brother and I noticed something with Watson not around they seemed to bond more. Then he didn't want Watson to take his baby brother yet. I'd say if there were more chapters where they work together and solve cases and Watson is left out he would get soon jealous.(giggle) he'll be happy and all with Mary but he won't have his best friend. Even in the movie Sherlock and john's relationship was more dominant than the brother's somewhat. Just an idea though.

Well, I think you messed up Mycroft a bit, but i love how you depict their relationship.

I liked this story, nice one to get back to fanfics with, been like, 2 years since I've read any :P It might not have been the right character for Mycroft, but when you have the image of Stephen fry as Mycroft now, it kinda works :)

I just want to point out that as far as I'm concerned Mycroft's character is just fine for the Guy Ritchie movie verse. Don't wory about how he is in the original books or any other adaptation. Just worry about what he's like in the movie. :)

Great Story btw.

Good job taking care of your brother, Mycroft.

I read this when you first wrote it, and it's still just as good. :)

This. Was. Awesome! I lovelovelove brotherly H/C like this! This was great! There were some minor grammatical errors throughout the story but nothing serious. Also, sometimes when you had two different dialogues in one line it got kinda confusing of who was saying what, but again, nothing serious.

Mycroft was a bit OOC but I all I know about his character is from Wikipedia and the BBC Sherlock. But I'm sure that Mycroft would act like this given the circumstances...except for the cleaning part..._

Anyway, this was awesome and I loved it! I wouldn't object to more stories surrounding this one, like, say, a scene of how Sherlock got that knife wound or something..._

Keep it up!

Arlothia

This is very, very sweet! D And dont worry: mycroft (while a little OOC), was written very well! )

Lol I liked this oneshot. It was nice.