do it! do it! DO it! do IT! DO IT! lol. great story so far. the charters really seems spot on with the show.

I know It's been a very, very, very, very long time but please keep writing! I love seeing them as a couple.

This is amazing! I love how you captured both of their personality's and how they react to one another, Jess was always more experienced with Rory in the romance department so I like how she had to expirament with him, and I like how you showed that he really did respect and love here there in the end. To him she wasn't just another Shane (I don't think he would have cared if she liked it or not).

Believe it or not, I'm still waiting for this story to continue!

Yes I oddly enough like the version you have of them together and wish they would take the next step :D!

I think that this hsould be what you want it to be, if you want them to have sex then go for it, if you don't then go for it. your story is powerful enough that it can go either way and neither will be bad. so please all i ask of you is that you update soon because i am hooked on your wonderful story.

Interesting story.

If they do it, please don't have him leave.

I really like this story so update soon!

well i love love this and ive read two of your other fanfics and love them also, now am going in to tackle a fiurth one, you are amazing keep writing cant wait to keep reading

much luv always
elie

Please update soon!

This story is awesome!

Well, I like this story actually! And I agree with some of the other readers...if he stays then by all means allow them to venture on into that dimension. Otherwise don't. And there are ways to write it in order to prevent you having to rate it M. For example:

"The sound of the bed creaking in tune with his body movements excited my body further causing me to arch my back into him. I wanted more. I craved more."

Just a friendly tip from a fellow writer. I will definitely continue reading! Update soon gal!

Hopelesslydevoted45

Please continue

Good chapter, more soon please.

This is an interesting story. I'm sure that hardly anyone wanted Rory's first sexual experience to be with Dean but it depends if you are going to ignore what happens in the show and write your own scene or not. I was thinking that her first experience would be with Dean but that would mean that her attempt with Jess would have to go over badly. I think it all comes down to whether you're going to ignore show events or not.

Have fun writing. Sorry if that was rather rambly. It's up to you.

Well, you need to somehow need to keep Jess from leaving. If you need to write a sex scene to prevent that, than, by all means-do so! Just don't let him leave!

Oh, and I loved it. Well-written, interesting...all that stuff. More soon?

please write a sex scene, good chapter