Hope you'll think about adding chapters to this great story!

I am going to kill you! Seriously? You cannot even begin to think about ending it there! You are seriously nuts if you seriously think you can end it there! I will hunt you down and make you write...you doubt me I see...well :b you HAVE to add at least one more chapter.

This is great... Poor Tommy I can not wait to read what happens next...

JENNIFER

I really enjoyed this tons, I just got done watching instant star (yes I sat in my room for a week and watched from episode one season one to episode thirteen season four whenever I got the chance) and I was seriously depressed that it was over, I can seriously see this happening and your writing really goes along with the way the show was written and set up.

Thank you for sharing this with us!

-WF

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Seriously? You cannot end it there, :(

Great job, though. Loved it.

I really enjoyed this one-shot. Have you considered continuing it? It would make a great story - love to see what happens!

I loved it. But it's only a one-shot? I really want to know what would happen next. But anyways, it was really great. I started crying during Tommy's part.

wow I love this. it's so powerfull it's ashame that you won't continue this story you write realy good. Good job!